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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > The Windblown Barn (Viewed 234 times)
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The Windblown Barn
< on 8/9/2010 3:49 AM >
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These shots are of a barn in Hutto, TX, I was using a camera I borrowed, a Sony something with a 10.2mp resolution, did some post editing with whatever the program on this computer is, which also isn't mine...as you can tell I'm just starting out as far as the photography end of this, but I thought these shots in particular looked pretty good so I'll offer them to you for criticisms, hopefully constructive.

1. before any editing


2. after some editing with windows picture editor or something


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5.







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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 1 on 8/9/2010 4:17 AM >
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Unedited version is 9 times better than the edited version. In the future, until you learn when it is or is not a good idea to mess with the saturation, I'd say leave it at 100% and not past it.

Number 5 has some pretty sweet potential. You cut off the leg of the ladder. Back up a bit.
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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 2 on 8/9/2010 2:49 PM >
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Thanks for the input! I also like the original of #1 better upon looking at them again.

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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 3 on 8/10/2010 3:58 AM >
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I also think that the edit makes the image look blurry.

it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.

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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 4 on 8/10/2010 6:46 PM >
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Posted by Porcelain Doll
I also think that the edit makes the image look blurry.


I agree.. Unedited is much sharper.

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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 5 on 8/12/2010 10:24 PM >
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I would suggest that you take your time when setting up your shots. Make sure your lines are straight and nothing is cut off.

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Re: The Windblown Barn
<Reply # 6 on 8/13/2010 2:00 AM >
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Nice barn!

I love barns and there are bunches of them here in the area. This is one in McKinney, where I'm at.



I've only made up into Denton once so far. Scoped out the woman's college a bit and a bit of downtown. There's definitely some good stuff to shoot there.


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