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kevinblahh location: STRANDED IN KPPC Gender: Male exploring is stupid. \|	critique this < on 5/22/2010 2:17 PM >

don_corleyone location: F/RoX Gender: Male I have abandonment issues \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 1 on 5/22/2010 2:31 PM >

	NEEDS MOAR HDR leave the gun. take the cannoli.

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<Reply # 2 on 5/22/2010 3:27 PM >

Posted by don_corleyone
NEEDS MOAR HDR

NEEDS MOAR GET OF TEH INTERNETS AND GO TO TEH BEACH

mANVIL- "if a super advanced race of aliens takes over the world, they will keep me alive for my efficiency, all you petty humans and their chewing"

willskith location: Boston, MA Gender: Male \| \| \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 3 on 5/22/2010 3:41 PM >

	Fuck, I'm looking for things to nitpick about but this is pretty awesome, the tones are killing me. Maybe step back and pan to the left a little to make more space on the left side of the piano? And maybe expose for another half or full stop, even though it looks awesome dark. grit your teeth in the face of fear. self repression is the true sign of a coward, toss your inhibitions to the wind.

swizzler location: Ontario Gender: Male \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 4 on 5/22/2010 4:13 PM >

	It needs less awesome...great flick! Canon EOS 5DMKII \| EF 24-105 f/4L \| EF 17-40 f/4L \| EF 50mm f/1.8 II \| Yashica Electro 35 GS

Derail6782 location: Pittsburgh Gender: Male \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 5 on 5/22/2010 5:58 PM >

	Great light! Yeah I can't find anything negative about it either.

Livingstone Gender: Male \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 6 on 5/22/2010 6:12 PM >

	The OCD in me wants more fan, the chandelier mounting plate and as willskith mentioned a little more left of piano. but in general I really like it, nice.

digital_me location: Colorado Gender: Male When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro \| \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 7 on 5/23/2010 1:08 AM >

	It's nice, but it's not terribly compelling. It needs more contrast or juxtaposition to create tension.

Adv.Pack location: Connecticut Adventure Pack \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 8 on 5/28/2010 11:50 PM >

	The lighting is great but as been said before, more fan and more chandelier. https://www.instagram.com/chris.kiely/ ttp://www.flickr.com/photos/adv_/

yokes location: Toronto Gender: Male I aim to misbehave \| \| \|	Re: critique this <Reply # 9 on 5/29/2010 12:11 AM >

	No fan. "Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water and stupid men." - Richard Nickel