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Axle
      
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<Reply # 1 on 2/8/2010 8:40 PM >
|  | | | An interesting shot with lots of potential. The following critique is my own opinion on the matter and my own personal tastes in aesthetics.
It's a very clean shot, very minimal in colour, with a clearly defined subject. However the part that bugs me in the composition of said subject. Obviously your object is to show off the broken nature of the sink, hence the high angle.
However, in doing so you make the lines of the image all weird. I would suggest going for a lower angle, either a straight on shot of the sink, with it aligned across the frame in a landscape orientation or keep the same portrait orientation but have the sink in profile.
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Steed
 
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Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 2 on 2/9/2010 5:31 AM >
| | | | That could possibly be the most interesting angle for viewing the sink. This picture might work better if you crop it closer on the bottom.
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sunshinin
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<Reply # 3 on 2/9/2010 6:44 PM >
| | | | i do like it, but i agree on the points made above regarding the composition.
also, i'd like to see more emphasis on the right corner of the sink so it doesn't get lost among the similar color of the white wall.
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kevinblahh
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exploring is stupid.
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<Reply # 4 on 3/5/2010 6:42 PM >
| | | | boring
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