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< on 1/26/2010 1:32 AM >
|  | | | Tonight I went for night photography - flags and moons are thankful objects.
However, I really liked this composition, but I couldn't not get the buildings in sight with my combination of lens. Getting the flag on the other side wasn't possible as well, I couldn't move much further to the right.
Off course, I can crop the buildings off. However, due to doing this, the flag is a litlle out of the "interest area". I think composition is better in the original one... or not?
What do you think and what do you think in general about these pics?
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Posted by turbozutek | 20/9/2005 2:29 | Dude, educate us! |
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IIVQ
location:
La Sud-Est du cité majeur du North-Holland (Bijlmer), .NL
Gender: Male
Back in Urbex!
| | | | | Re: Composition
<Reply # 1 on 1/26/2010 1:40 AM >
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I came to a satisfactory solution by first rotating the image a bit before cropping it - that way I could get the flag higher up in the image and still not have the buildings in there! Due to it being shot upwards, you hardly notice it's in a weird direction. Only think now is the little "pluck" in the bottom-right corner but I can live with it.
Any suggestions?
Posted by MapMan | 18/9/2005 19:25 | Hedy Lamarr made porn?
Posted by turbozutek | 20/9/2005 2:29 | Dude, educate us! |
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k9uknit
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<Reply # 2 on 1/27/2010 3:37 PM >
| | | | I don't like any of them, I think they lack an interesting subject IMO. I do like the sky however. It's got a cool gradient of color. I say get a better subject. Also not a fan of the len flare around the moon. Again this is the critique section so this is only my opinion.
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puravida9539
location:
Dallas Area
Gender: Male
Just give me a flashlight
| | Re: Composition
<Reply # 4 on 1/28/2010 10:16 PM >
| | | | The last one was definitely an improvement on the picture, but it still didn't do much for me. It might be because the flag is the subject, and its blurry from the movement. My eyes were drawn to the flag, but then I didn't really want to actually look at it.
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desmet
When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro.
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<Reply # 5 on 1/29/2010 3:55 AM >
| | | | Yea, the composition of both of these is not good. There's also no subject.
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mr.v
location:
Rhode Island
Gender: Male
"Man cannot separate means and enlightenment"
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<Reply # 6 on 2/4/2010 12:05 AM >
| | | | ^Repeat of the above, except the half-tree at the bottom is just goddamn distracting. again, repeating, but portrait mode would have done better/
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kevinblahh
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STRANDED IN KPPC
Gender: Male
exploring is stupid.
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<Reply # 7 on 2/4/2010 12:06 AM >
| | | | these do nothing for me.
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