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victoria- location: The Great North, Ontario Gender: Female \|	First critique < on 1/18/2010 5:15 PM >

	So i picked a few shots I love. I'm into Macro images and small details. 1. 2. 3.

Steed location: Edmonton/Seoul Gender: Male Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor \| \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 1 on 1/19/2010 12:18 AM >

	The first two are decent but definitely not UE photos. We have a non-UE photo critiques board actually. The third looks like a good subject. What you need to do though is make the vertical lines more straight. Also you should not have the corner in the exact center, unless you make the image perfectly symmetrical. You can improve it by cropping.

victoria- location: The Great North, Ontario Gender: Female \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 2 on 1/19/2010 6:06 AM >

	the first two i believe are UE related, the first is a macro of floor moss. :3 and the second is a vine that grew up a brick wall on an abandonment

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Re: First critique
<Reply # 3 on 1/19/2010 6:12 AM >

Posted by victoria-
the first two i believe are UE related, the first is a macro of floor moss. :3 and the second is a vine that grew up a brick wall on an abandonment

Okay, you got me there. I just couldn't see any sort of decay in them, but that's hardly a prerequisite.

victoria- location: The Great North, Ontario Gender: Female \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 4 on 1/19/2010 1:54 PM >

	thanks, my camera was on the fritz when i took these.

DJ Craig Moderator location: Johnson City, TN Gender: Male Break the Silence \| \| \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 5 on 1/19/2010 8:18 PM >

	#1 is definitely my favorite out of these. "You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go..." -Dr. Suess

macgruder location: Northern NJ Gender: Male \| \| \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 6 on 1/25/2010 9:34 PM >

	I think the first shot could use a bit of sharpening unless oyu wanted a softer look. Try filter>sharpen>unsharp mask in photoshop. Canon 5D Mark III, Canon 50mm 1.2, Canon 28mm 1.8, Canon 16-35 f2.8L http://www.flickr.com/photos/stevenbley/

gr8fzy1 location: Waterbury, CT Gender: Male Fewer and Fewer... \| \| \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 7 on 1/29/2010 2:45 AM >

	I love moss, and a macro of moss is even better! Love #1 to death! Are those wall tiles? They look almost like a pressed tin ceiling. #2 doesn't do anything for me though... Softly creeping through Empty hallways decades old, glimpsing history.

Maglyte \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 8 on 1/31/2010 12:09 AM >

	maybe closeups would not call these macros, what lens you sporting? mmmm. mandias.......

victoria- location: The Great North, Ontario Gender: Female \|	Re: First critique <Reply # 9 on 2/1/2010 8:04 PM >

	it had tin all over the walls. i wish i could remember what camera i was using at the time. its an old nikon when digital cameras first came out decent camera but it was on its way out when i took these.

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