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edsel
   
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This is my first time posting in this section and would love everyone opinions on what you think.
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Thanks for looking
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dreckenschill
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Troy
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 12/17/2009 2:20 AM >
| | | | im liking 5 but from a little higher angle.
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Off-Limits
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Leuven, Belgium
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 2 on 12/17/2009 9:09 PM >
| | | | 1: Could be framed better, there's too much black in it
2: straighten the shot and lower the ISO. I also find the out-of-focus bars in front too distracting.
3: Great shot
4: The shots is ok, a bit overexposed maybe, and the scene looks staged
5: Very original POV, great DOF, again: lower your ISO
6: Very nice
7: Awesome! A bit too much sharpening perhaps.
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edsel
location:
Under your skin
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<Reply # 3 on 12/18/2009 12:20 AM >
| | | | Thanks Off-Limits, They were all taking hand held except for the last 2 so I needed the high ISO for some of the shots.
Im sure #4 was set up by someone but thats how I found it when I walked into that room.
for #7 the only sharpening I added was in camera #1, but I always have it like that.
Thanks again for the input!
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gr8fzy1
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Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
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<Reply # 4 on 12/18/2009 4:07 PM >
| | | | Oh god, I want #6 for my desktop! The colors are perfect, and the combination of rock solid wall and flowing clouds makes it eye popping! Do you have a high res version?
Runner up is #3, love the glass.
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
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gutterbabies
 
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Iowa
"Who takes a lawn chair urban exploring?"
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<Reply # 5 on 12/18/2009 5:03 PM >
| | | | First of all, what camera are you using?
For 1, I would recommend a little cropping.
2 seems slightly overexposed in some areas. The bars were also a little distracting.
My favorite is 3... it's something simple yet beautiful; something you don't see a lot of on here. You have a great eye, and your perspective in truly refreshing.
4 does look staged, but was also a good shot.
5: once again a very refreshing perspective.
6 and 7 are really just amazing.
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Protios
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Lower Sackville, Nova Scotia
Gender: Male
To get where you're going, Remember where you've been
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<Reply # 6 on 12/18/2009 5:17 PM >
| | | | I think 6 could use just a bit of straightening, it seems like the left side is higher than the right side. Love the shot, but it's makin' me twitch a bit because it doesn't look straight.
The rest everyone else mentioned here and there. Overall a very good set.
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edsel
location:
Under your skin
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<Reply # 7 on 12/18/2009 7:12 PM >
| | | | Thanks all.
emilyONION I use a D700. Those where all taken with a 24-70 2.8
I straightened up number #6 and it does look better.
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