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RochesterUE
    
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
 |  | Rochester Tease
< on 10/6/2008 6:13 PM >
|  | | | Please, if you know where this is shhh! If not, please do not ask.
Your comments are appreciated!
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http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
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<Reply # 1 on 10/6/2008 6:13 PM >
| | | | The biggest one is my favorite.
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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msgsudz
location:
Peterborough, Ontario
Gender: Male
Msgsudz has an overactive bowel and shits like a Clydesdale.
| |  | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 2 on 10/6/2008 6:17 PM >
| | | | hey i know where that is!!! those are from an abandoned building!!
"She's built like a steakhouse, but handles like a bistro!" - Zapp Brannigan
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 3 on 10/6/2008 6:20 PM >
| | | | Posted by msgsudz
hey i know where that is!!! those are from an abandoned building!!
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Nooo!!!!
Haha, get it?
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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trent
  
I'm Trent! Get Bent!
location:
Drainwhale hunting
Gender: Male
Not on UER anymore.
| | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 4 on 10/6/2008 6:23 PM >
| | | | Who's that guy licking the asbestos off the pipes?
He who rules the underground, rules the city above.
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 5 on 10/6/2008 6:37 PM >
| | | | Posted by trent
Who's that guy licking the asbestos off the pipes?
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This guy!
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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Dr. Sneeze
location:
CHICAGO
Gender: Male
Sorry Officer, we were just looking for our favorite tennis ball we lost.
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 6 on 10/6/2008 6:41 PM >
| | | | what's nailed to the wall in 5??
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trent
I'm Trent! Get Bent!
location:
Drainwhale hunting
Gender: Male
Not on UER anymore.
| | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 7 on 10/6/2008 6:46 PM >
| | | | Posted by Dr. Sneeze
what's nailed to the wall in 5??
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Looks like a welding mask hanging on some nails.
He who rules the underground, rules the city above.
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yokes
location:
Toronto
Gender: Male
I aim to misbehave
| |  | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 8 on 10/6/2008 7:18 PM >
| | | | I'm intrigued.
"Great architecture has only two natural enemies: water and stupid men." - Richard Nickel |
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 9 on 10/6/2008 7:24 PM >
| | | | Posted by trent
Looks like a welding mask hanging on some nails.
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Bingo.
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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ph0to
location:
Massachuestts
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 10 on 10/7/2008 3:20 AM >
| | | | where is this!?!?
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msgsudz
location:
Peterborough, Ontario
Gender: Male
Msgsudz has an overactive bowel and shits like a Clydesdale.
| | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 11 on 10/7/2008 4:05 AM >
| | | | Posted by ph0to
where is this!?!?
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fuck don't you read before posting??
its an abandoned building....sheesh.
"She's built like a steakhouse, but handles like a bistro!" - Zapp Brannigan
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 12 on 10/7/2008 12:49 PM >
| | | | So anyone have any feedback for me?
Anyone?...
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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trent
I'm Trent! Get Bent!
location:
Drainwhale hunting
Gender: Male
Not on UER anymore.
| | | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 13 on 10/7/2008 3:11 PM >
| | | | We're in the critique section and you want a critique, that's crazy talk!
Well, time for a overly-long trent critique!
#1 Not level. Could use a little right rotation. Also, I see some of the lines (especially right-most column) are bent. The windows which I assume are the subject appear to be fairly vertical, but those damn columns aren't and are distracting. I might mess around with some rotation to see if there is a happy medium or if it's those columns or the windows which should remain vertical. Oh, and I don'y like the person in this shot (me). Possibly because it me so it's not as interesting, I'm not sure. But I don't seem to be doing anything particularly interesting. For me I'd be more curious seeing that shot without a person in it. Though It's tough for me to call because there's a conflict of interest for me here.
#2 Same thing as #1 in regards of the rotation. Those are some trickier ones to 'level out' because it see how in the background it appears level, but the foreground isn't as much. I struggle with hose types of shots myself. I've been successfully generally lining up verticals in the middle of the shot nearest to where the subject is. So in this shot, I would make those vertical asbestos pipes by where I'm kneeling down the perfect vertical and then see how everything else looks. Comment from #1 in regards to people in the shot also applies.
#3 Got some "lens bend" going on again on this one (left column). I just made up that term. It happens with my digital point and shoot often for things that are within 0-5 feet from the lens. In regards do your DSLR there, what lens were you using? Not that I'll know if it was causing the bend, but I'm just curious. Someone will have to address the bending for you. Possibly a different lends might take care of that. I'm also sensing a little blur on that shot.
#4 You nailed the rotation and any "bending issues" on this one. Generally I like the shot, but from a critique standpoint that's probably a tough shot to make really interesting since it's just a void of an empty room. For what subject matter is is, it's a well-done shot and I like the dark eeriness of the wood floor and brick.
#5 This one is my favorite. I can't believe I missed that mask. I want to shoot that myself! I would love to see this one re-shot and/or cropped to drop that right side of the shot that gets dark around the corner of the bricks. That little thin triangle of darkness distracts me. Though I like this one and it's the strongest of the lot I think.
Hope that helps.
PS: I'm finding that extra shot that you posted more interesting than the other ones with people in them. This shot is tied in my opinion for the strongest of what you've posted here. This one I actually find my backside interesting. I myself find myself thinking about what my past-self was looking at out the window.
He who rules the underground, rules the city above.
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don_corleyone
location:
F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: Rochester Tease
<Reply # 14 on 10/7/2008 4:41 PM >
| | | | the only one i like is #2, but i wish you had of gotten all the window on the left in the shot.
the rest are under-exposed and have lots of distortion.
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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