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Various Shots
< on 9/8/2008 3:01 AM >
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Okay, I hesitated posting here, but I honestly do want to keep learning with my photos. I only use photoshop to grayscale and to sometimes adjust levels. I try to leave them as true as possible. Any comments (good or constructive) would be appreciated. Thanks!


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2 A forgotten leg of The Bruce Trail


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Re: Various Shots
<Reply # 1 on 9/8/2008 9:01 PM >
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The first shot lacks depth of field

The second one is great, good angle and lighting.

The third one is disastrously poetic. Very good

The fourth one is somewhat random, but different.

The fifth one, that tree calls my name, I love these shots, especially tree shots.

The sixth one, the tree life and grass need more of a shade spectrum, try fiddling with the Black and White adjustments on all your shots and you'll see the difference of depth and clarity you can achieve.

Overall, good shots, needs a deeper tone of black and white or darker grays (since you did grayscale)

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Re: Various Shots
<Reply # 2 on 9/8/2008 10:05 PM >
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Thanks
Yes, I am still experimenting with getting the BW tones that I want....I wasn't satisfied with the last one. Thanks for your input.

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Re: Various Shots
<Reply # 3 on 9/8/2008 10:17 PM >
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The first shot doesn't have much of a composition to it. My eye just isn't drawn to anything specific when I look at it. The rest, however, have quite good composition. The only thing I'd say is that all but #3 have a lot of middle gray. Bump up the contrast some, and I think they would be a lot more eye-catching.

Overall though, very nice

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