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turkey
 
Gender: Male
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< on 6/19/2008 3:44 PM >
|  | | | Although there are no real signs in these photo's, this place used to be a deepsea trawler companies head offices.
This place has awesome natural decay, and I hope i've captured it quite well...
what do you guys think?
All photo's taken with Nikon D50 with Sigma 10-20 lens.
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turk ;)
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turkey
Gender: Male
| | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 1 on 6/24/2008 3:20 PM >
| | | | no critique?
If its do'able, do it! |
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silver halide
Gender: Male
| | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 2 on 6/24/2008 5:12 PM >
| | | | 1,2, and 4 are nice. I like the plant in the first one. The Fire Exit shot, you weren't quite square to the wall I think, and there's a little piece of more sign peeking in which is distracting.
Good stuff.
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Live-Bait
 
| | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 3 on 6/25/2008 5:54 AM >
| | | | me no talky in official photo language, but can tell you my reaction in layman's terms.
think 1 and 4 need to be straightened a lil bit...just a smidgen for both of them so they are level. 3 and 2 are just boring content for me. i think except for 3 and 4 that they are all great shots...but think 1 and 2 need to be tweaked a lil bit so they pop better. maybe play around with the lighting and sharpen them up a bit? i like the stairway shots as is. good stuff.
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starberries
location:
West Chester, Pennsylvania
Gender: Female
| | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 4 on 7/5/2008 6:54 AM >
| | | | I really like #1. I think it does capture that natural decay you mentioned, quite well.
I disagree with the previous post. I don't think #2 is boring, I actually really liked it. I would have liked it more if the shadow in the upper right corner wasn't there, but overall it intrigued me. Just a difference in personal tastes, I think. 
The angle at which you shot #5 is fantastic. I love it. And #7's angle is good as well.
Great shots. Seems like an awesome place!
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Martino
location:
Almere - NL
Gender: Male
2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule!
| |  | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 5 on 7/5/2008 4:08 PM >
| | | | #1 = great!! (lil tilted as said before)
#2 - nice shot - maybe a bit more contrast?
#3 - good shot but is does not have "it"
#4 - great shot again!!
#5 - not for me, i find the blue thing very distracting.
#6 - different lines could make this one even better (but i don't know how should do that.  )
#7 - nice angle!!
#8 - I love these kind of staircase shots! great photo!
overall i think you've done a great job. I would love to see more of this place. and i really like the bit a fuzzy feel in #1 and #8
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trent
  
I'm Trent! Get Bent!
location:
Drainwhale hunting
Gender: Male
Not on UER anymore.
| | | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 6 on 7/6/2008 5:14 PM >
| | | | I am a photography newb.
As a newb I really like #3 even those no one else seemed to like it. That side room that you can see though both windows really keeps me coming back. It's pretty interesting.
1 & 2 were also very nice.
4 looks like a really cool room, but I wish were was more too see of it. I don't like the ceiling being chopped off.
5, 6, and 7 I can't stand because of my OCD. I can't stand it that they're all rotated at angles.
8: But now you take the pic stright up and it seems boring to me. Not a bad pic, but the subject matter just isn't as interesting as the other pics.
Overall, very nice. Better than I could do.
He who rules the underground, rules the city above.
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willskith
location:
Boston, MA
Gender: Male
| |  | | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 7 on 7/10/2008 9:24 PM >
| | | | I am not a fan of "extreme" angles like in 5-7, but this is a strong set overall.
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InterplanetAnna
location:
Cincinnati, OH
Gender: Female
| | | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 8 on 7/29/2008 11:20 PM >
| | | | I really enjoy number one.
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sYnOnYx
location:
Las Vegas , NV
Gender: Male
what happens here, doesnt stay here.
| |  | | | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 9 on 7/29/2008 11:22 PM >
| | | | #8 is FTW !
was there anything left to show what is was before ?
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slipster
location:
Pittsburg, CA
Gender: Male
Uber Elite
| | | | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 10 on 7/29/2008 11:39 PM >
| | | | needs more light in all of the pictures
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Cute Fuzzy Kitten
location:
Montreal
Gender: Male
Monsters prefer blondes
| | Re: Gone Fishing...
<Reply # 11 on 7/30/2008 1:13 PM >
|  | | | I really like all your stairs pictures, you've got nice angles.
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