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ka-beh
 
location:
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Female
every time it smells like piiineconess in here , daddy be trippin.. . .
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< on 4/16/2008 7:20 PM >
|  | | | i've never had anyone who was super interested in architectural and urban explorative photography, so i'm excited to hear what some of you friends think of what i've chosen for my first photopost
i'm really into colours, light and reflections.
    
http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaybell/
http://s88.photobu...lbums/k196/kahbeh/ |
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IrIsHmOm
location:
San Joaquin Valley, CA
Gender: Female
I'll kill your face...
| |  | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 1 on 4/16/2008 7:35 PM >
| | | | They're too small to see clearly..
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MHInc
   
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location:
Niagara Falls, Ontario Canada
Gender: Male
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 3 on 4/16/2008 8:24 PM >
| | | | Posted by ka-beh
i had to make them less than 100k to upload them. . . hence the small size. not my choice
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Put them on photobucket and then post the links.
It's hard to critique something you can't see dude(ette)
modified to change dude to dudette
[last edit 4/16/2008 8:28 PM by MHInc - edited 3 times]
MH Inc. Photography Canada
http://www.mhinccanada.com
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SkaSkank
location:
North East
Gender: Male
You can't wait for inspiration, you have to go after it with a club.
| | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 4 on 4/16/2008 9:09 PM >
| | | | From what I can see a lot of them look pretty blown out. What kind of camera are you using? If it has a manual mode, read up and use it. You will be amazed how quickly you improve.
Also, with what MHInc said, you should really get a photobucket, It'd be nice to see larger pictures.
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ka-beh
location:
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Female
every time it smells like piiineconess in here , daddy be trippin.. . .
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 5 on 4/16/2008 10:57 PM >
| | | | thanks for the input guys.
many of my friends are too nice when it comes to looking at my photography you know?
however, about being blown out, i do tend to use a longer shutter speed but i really like the super light that comes in from cracks and windows . . ..
i use a Canon powershot S5 IS
its my baby. i'm in love.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaybell/
http://s88.photobu...lbums/k196/kahbeh/ |
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insainly sound
location:
Bay Area, CA
Gender: Female
How'd we get here, and how are we getting out of here?!
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 6 on 4/17/2008 5:19 PM >
| | | | Posted by ka-beh
thanks for the input guys.
many of my friends are too nice when it comes to looking at my photography you know?
however, about being blown out, i do tend to use a longer shutter speed but i really like the super light that comes in from cracks and windows . . ..
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HDR is your friend in that case....
Check out my photo blog! |
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ka-beh
location:
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Female
every time it smells like piiineconess in here , daddy be trippin.. . .
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 7 on 4/17/2008 6:21 PM >
| | | | i do actually have a photobucket account, but i didnt know it was possible to use for this . . so sweet! i'll update pics in larger size for optimal viewing once i've updated the bucket
 thanks guys
http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaybell/
http://s88.photobu...lbums/k196/kahbeh/ |
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metawaffle
 
King of Puns
location:
Brisbane!
Gender: Male
Purveyor of Fine Lampshades
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 8 on 4/18/2008 1:21 AM >
| | | | I'll be wild and crazy here, and say that if you like the look of the blown-out highlights, stick with it, and see where it takes you.
http://www.longexposure.net |
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gr8fzy1
location:
Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| |  | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 9 on 4/22/2008 4:26 PM >
| | | | Posted by metawaffle
I'll be wild and crazy here, and say that if you like the look of the blown-out highlights, stick with it, and see where it takes you.
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I agree, you look like the kind of person that can make a blow out work FOR you rather than against. Keep up with the practicing and see you soon.
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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ka-beh
location:
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Female
every time it smells like piiineconess in here , daddy be trippin.. . .
| | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 10 on 4/22/2008 11:34 PM >
| | | | thank you for the vote of confidence!
i take thousands of pictures and i do tend to be drawn to photography on the more over exposed than the underexposed side.
i am definitely going to repost this photographs in larger size so you can see just what i mean
http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaybell/
http://s88.photobu...lbums/k196/kahbeh/ |
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gr8fzy1
location:
Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| | | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 11 on 4/24/2008 1:50 PM >
| | | | Posted by ka-beh
thank you for the vote of confidence!
i take thousands of pictures and i do tend to be drawn to photography on the more over exposed than the underexposed side.
i am definitely going to repost this photographs in larger size so you can see just what i mean
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Lookin forward to it!
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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Oryx
location:
Who knows
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| | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 12 on 4/24/2008 4:50 PM >
| | | | Posted by ka-beh
thanks for the input guys.
many of my friends are too nice when it comes to looking at my photography you know?
however, about being blown out, i do tend to use a longer shutter speed but i really like the super light that comes in from cracks and windows . . ..
i use a Canon powershot S5 IS
its my baby. i'm in love.
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Hehe I know what you mean. I'm in love with my SD600 even though I really need an upgrade...
But yes, constructive criticism all the way.
Lookin forward to seeing more pics =)
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gr8fzy1
location:
Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| | | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 14 on 4/25/2008 2:24 PM >
| | | | How did you get that effect on the first one? Pull the camera up on the last few seconds of the exposure?
#2 is okay, but needs to be sharpened a bit more.
#3 could use a little more contrast to bring back some of the detail in the rubble.
And I really like the clarity in the last two shot. Looking good ka-beh!
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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Oryx
location:
Who knows
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| | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 15 on 4/25/2008 4:26 PM >
| | | | Ooh cool. 1st one is fun. 2nd one is alright, but doesn't really catch my interest too much. 3rd one is kinda grainy. Nice reflection in the 4th and I like the colors in 5.
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gr8fzy1
location:
Waterbury, CT
Gender: Male
Fewer and Fewer...
| | | | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 17 on 5/9/2008 6:35 PM >
| | | | You're welcome.
Softly creeping through
Empty hallways decades old,
glimpsing history. |
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Bean
location:
Pickering
Gender: Female
I once met a girl, or should I say she once met me
| | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 18 on 5/20/2008 8:32 PM >
| | | | I enjoy photographers who are into shadows - can't wait to see more.
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mastershakes
location:
sioux falls, SD
Gender: Male
For only in the grip of darkness will we shine amidst the brightest stars
| | Re: first photo critique
<Reply # 19 on 5/26/2008 7:20 AM >
| | | | very nice indeed
"for only in the grip of darkness, will we shine amidst the brightest stars." -cradle of filth |
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