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justpunchit314
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Central Ma
Gender: Male
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masiakowski
 
location:
Scotland | Poland
Gender: Male
Way To Illusion
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<Reply # 1 on 2/29/2008 7:54 PM >
| | | | Very nice. I like the composition in the first one and the focus in the second one!  Well done!
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YouOnlyLiveOnce
location:
san francisco, ca
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 2 on 2/29/2008 8:08 PM >
| | | | #3 is a bit too symetrical and a little plain. maybe a different angle would make it more interesting...?
#1 & 2 are very nice. i agree with 'masiakowski' about the composition on #1 and focus on #2...nice job!
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aikefu
location:
SW Ohio
Gender: Male
Yes.
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<Reply # 3 on 2/29/2008 8:32 PM >
| | | | 01 is a very nice picture. Good job.
02 is a little too blurry, and I might suggest trying it without cutting off the edges of the tub, giving it a little breathing space around the edges.
03's subject just isn't very interesting, though...
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justpunchit314
location:
Central Ma
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 4 on 2/29/2008 8:52 PM >
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01 is a very nice picture. Good job.
02 is a little too blurry, and I might suggest trying it without cutting off the edges of the tub, giving it a little breathing space around the edges.
03's subject just isn't very interesting, though...
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I wish I could of with number 2 but my Mamiya only has a 80mm lense so thats as wide as I could get it I was leaning against the wall already lol. thanks for all the critiques so far guys!
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nohbdy
 
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 5 on 2/29/2008 9:16 PM >
| | | | the #2 is the best, i love the tight DoF
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insainly sound
location:
Bay Area, CA
Gender: Female
How'd we get here, and how are we getting out of here?!
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<Reply # 6 on 3/1/2008 12:03 AM >
| | | | I'm totally digging number one personally my favorite. I absolutely love the composition of it. Number two I like but I found my eye went to the blurry part before the part that's in focus. Three I honestly don't like, it's too plain, too symmetrical. Anyways, that's my opinion.
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justpunchit314
location:
Central Ma
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 7 on 3/1/2008 11:56 AM >
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I'm totally digging number one personally my favorite. I absolutely love the composition of it. Number two I like but I found my eye went to the blurry part before the part that's in focus. Three I honestly don't like, it's too plain, too symmetrical. Anyways, that's my opinion.
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I agree with you on number 3 I loved those elevator doors but really everything around them was really blah.
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