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Corporal_Clegg location: Baltimore, MD Gender: Male \| \| \|	'The Arms of Industry' < on 8/27/2007 3:21 AM >

	Since it's only one I thought I'd just post it here in the critique section. Taken today, I have more, I just need to resize/border more of them. YEAHBUTWAT

Lexi location: Oslo, Norway Gender: Female I'm getting old. \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 1 on 8/27/2007 3:36 AM >

	Wow, dude. Wow. Your art has come so far since you started sharing it with me. I'm awed. [15:00:33] <SeeThirty> cause you're not likely to be anywhere that other people haven't been who didn't have protection [15:00:41] <SeeThirty> still better safe than lexi

Urbex Tom location: Massachusetts Gender: Male \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 2 on 8/27/2007 3:44 AM >

	I call bullshit. backpack full of bear

location:
Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male

Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 3 on 8/27/2007 3:49 AM >

Posted by Urbex Tom
I call bullshit.

lmao what?

Thanks Lexi

YEAHBUTWAT

Martino location: Almere - NL Gender: Male 2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule! \| \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 4 on 8/27/2007 3:05 PM >

	looks like you're out of focus. http://www.flickr.com/photos/martino_

location:
Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male

Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 5 on 8/31/2007 4:34 AM >

Posted by Martino
looks like you're out of focus.

What the one on the left? Yeah I focused in on the one on the right.

YEAHBUTWAT

location:
Almere - NL
Gender: Male

2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule!

Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 6 on 9/1/2007 11:51 AM >

Posted by Corporal_Clegg

What the one on the left? Yeah I focused in on the one on the right.

the one on the right is sharper than the one left, but still...

Corporal_Clegg location: Baltimore, MD Gender: Male \| \| \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 7 on 9/1/2007 3:45 PM >

	Well besides it being out of focus what do you think? YEAHBUTWAT

Tupsumato location: Finland Gender: Male How close can you go? \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 8 on 9/1/2007 4:17 PM >

	I like it. However, there's some things that could be improved. As said, the picture is a bit out of focus. The framing could also be improved - now there's too much empty on the right and the bottom of the left... err... valve(?) is out of frame. Since pictures like this look usually better when they are "symmetrical", it could also look better if you had taken the picture perpendicular to the... hrhrhrmmr... those things. The background is a bit restless and could look better if it was out of focus. Of course, if you don't have a suitable lens, it can't be helped. All information and details given in good faith but not guaranteed!

Martino location: Almere - NL Gender: Male 2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule! \| \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 9 on 9/1/2007 7:23 PM >

	sorry dude quit interesting shot! otherwise i wouldn't have noticed. Tupsumato about said it http://www.flickr.com/photos/martino_

Seemoo location: Berkeley, CA Gender: Male \| \|	Re: 'The Arms of Industry' <Reply # 10 on 9/1/2007 8:52 PM >

	I agree with Tupsumato. I like the shot a lot. I think one thing that could have improved it is, by closing down the aperture so the second thingy would be in focus as well... Anyway, I like the colors a lot.

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