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secretdestroyers location: Baltimore Gender: Male \| \|	That rubber factory < on 7/23/2007 11:53 AM >

	1 2 3 4 5 6 please rip them apart more at 724Photography.com F this I"m going exploring!

Mark Vicious \|	Re: That rubber factory <Reply # 1 on 7/24/2007 6:35 PM >

	#1 is good. #2 is messy, especially in B&W. #3 is messy. #5, you should have gotten the whole tower thing in the shot. #6, a little too much black, maybe crop some of the bottom? I think it would have looked better vertical, more focused on the piping on top rather than the darkness at the bottom. [last edit 7/24/2007 6:36 PM by Mark Vicious - edited 1 times] *

Shr-eddie location: Toronto Gender: Male \|	Re: That rubber factory <Reply # 2 on 7/24/2007 7:29 PM >

	#4 looks a bit too contrasty, but that's just me

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Re: That rubber factory
<Reply # 3 on 7/29/2007 11:40 AM >

Posted by Mark Vicious
#1 is good.

#2 is messy, especially in B&W.

#3 is messy.

#5, you should have gotten the whole tower thing in the shot.

#6, a little too much black, maybe crop some of the bottom? I think it would have looked better vertical, more focused on the piping on top rather than the darkness at the bottom.

can you define messy?

F this I"m going exploring!

Mark Vicious \|	Re: That rubber factory <Reply # 4 on 7/29/2007 7:22 PM >

	There is too much going on in the shot. #3 looks out of focus. *

secretdestroyers location: Baltimore Gender: Male \| \|	Re: That rubber factory <Reply # 5 on 8/24/2007 11:24 AM >

	one more for now maybe more to come, who knows. F this I"m going exploring!

cwestcivic5 location: Michigan Gender: Male \|	Re: That rubber factory <Reply # 6 on 8/26/2007 1:13 AM >

	yeah the one with the graffiti is a little bright. maybe its just the difference in our moniters? i like the one you just posted.

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