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tk0667 location: Atlanta, Ga Gender: Male The KiltedMadMan \| \| \|	Prison Farm < on 7/17/2007 12:40 PM >

	Just hit a abandoned prison Farm here in Ga. And would love some comments on some of my shots to see what can be done differently or am I doing just fine? I'm always looking to learn and improve. [last edit 7/17/2007 12:41 PM by tk0667 - edited 1 times] What do I wear under my Kilt?....My Boots.

Martino location: Almere - NL Gender: Male 2,5 days 5691 km, 1200 cigarettes, 131 beers, 67 locations, 3 girs and 2 cars! I absolutely rule! \| \|	Re: Prison Farm <Reply # 1 on 7/17/2007 1:21 PM >

	Cool place! The first is great, I keep looking at that one! To get better: - straighten your shots. 2nd shot: The windows draw a lot of attention to them because they're bright and run out of the shot. Try to take this shot and use the light that falls on the subject without showing the lightsource. (watch your own shadow if your using light from behind ) [last edit 7/17/2007 1:25 PM by Martino - edited 1 times] http://www.flickr.com/photos/martino_

emck00 location: 518/315, New York. Gender: Female \| \|	Re: Prison Farm <Reply # 2 on 7/17/2007 5:43 PM >

	In 2 i would have backed up in order to not cut off that leg

tk0667

location:
Atlanta, Ga
Gender: Male

The KiltedMadMan

Re: Prison Farm
<Reply # 3 on 7/17/2007 6:06 PM >

Posted by emck00
In 2 i would have backed up in order to not cut off that leg

YEah I tried. JUST to the left of the left border was a wall that was in the way. I cropped it out and lost the leg. =( But thanks for looking =)

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zmuh11 location: St. Louis Gender: Male \|	Re: Prison Farm <Reply # 4 on 7/18/2007 1:30 PM >

	I find that 1 is really cool, nice work on that one. I also like #4, I just don't know what the subject. There is "too much" going on in the picture. I think if that piece of equipment near the right edge of the picture were gone it would be a lot better. But nice work all around.

tk0667

location:
Atlanta, Ga
Gender: Male

The KiltedMadMan

Re: Prison Farm
<Reply # 5 on 7/18/2007 2:18 PM >

Posted by zmuh11
I find that 1 is really cool, nice work on that one.

I also like #4, I just don't know what the subject. There is "too much" going on in the picture. I think if that piece of equipment near the right edge of the picture were gone it would be a lot better.

But nice work all around.

Thanks for the input. I kind of liked the decay and the abandoned technology in the shot. From the Metal Detector to the Copier. All various levels of tecnology yet all have met the same fate.

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182 lbs of sad location: in the gym training my ass off! Gender: Male \|	Re: Prison Farm <Reply # 6 on 7/18/2007 2:40 PM >

	they are kinda snap shotty, try working on your composition, concentrate on a particular subject and shoot that instead of trying to get the "whole picture" if you know what i mean. also work on your focusing these shots seem to look off balanced and blurry. keep shooting thought theses shots definitely have potential. if you have any questions feel free to pm me... Fight like a man Bleed like a man Die like a man

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