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COWBOY695
location: NORTHERN CALI ( NO NOT SAN FRANSISCO) Gender: Male
| | just a feeble try < on 6/20/2007 1:37 PM >
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onewingedangel
location: omaha, nebraska Gender: Female
sweet bliss
| | | | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 1 on 6/20/2007 3:07 PM >
| | | Not bad really, I like the lighting in one, though if you cropped the right side just a little youd draw more attention to the subject at hand because right now my eye is drawn to the trailers in the background. On three, a little bit more of a shot to the right might have caught a little more of the curves of the truck but still not a bad shot, because you caught the character of it with the paint and the tumbleweed at the bottom shows its probably been there a while. OWA
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Trevzilla
location: St. John's, Newfoundland Gender: Male
To hell with purple people....unless they're suffocating, Help Them!
| | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 2 on 6/20/2007 3:39 PM >
| | | I think your tractor's sexy
You're only as young as who you feel! |
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Allva
location: San Antonio, Texas Gender: Male
I have my moments.
| | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 3 on 6/20/2007 3:53 PM >
| | | First two are way two similar and snapshotty. Third one is in need of composition. Take more and choose the best.
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Shr-eddie
location: Toronto Gender: Male
| | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 4 on 6/21/2007 12:13 AM >
| | | Three's composition isn't too bad, if you took maybe 5 steps back and pointed the camera to the right a bit and got the top of the truck in the picture it would have been better.
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hydrotherapy
Clever Girl location: Circle of Least Confusion
RPS is inside all of us
| | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 5 on 6/21/2007 12:48 AM >
| | | I'd love to see the first shot from closer to the ground, shot upwards. Last one does nothing for me, and the second is a duplicate of the first. Nice quality of light and good potential for some nice contrast/saturation in the first one. Just isn't quite there yet.
Get down, girl, go 'head, get down. |
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lindsayphoto
location: philly Gender: Female
| | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 6 on 6/21/2007 10:24 PM >
| | | The truck photo is well done.
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182 lbs of sad
location: in the gym training my ass off! Gender: Male
| | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 7 on 6/22/2007 4:39 AM >
| | | Posted by Allva First two are way two similar and snapshotty. Third one is in need of composition. Take more and choose the best.
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agreed, try to get lower, dont be afraid to "get dirty" lay down crawl, do anything you have to to get your shot
Fight like a man Bleed like a man Die like a man |
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grateful
location: buffalo,ny Gender: Female
time takes time
| | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 8 on 6/22/2007 5:03 AM >
| | | im no photographer but you've captured true essence here.
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COWBOY695
location: NORTHERN CALI ( NO NOT SAN FRANSISCO) Gender: Male
| | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 9 on 6/22/2007 9:38 AM >
| | | thanks ya all. I was just trying the first sun light out the other morning cause I couldnt sleep. Yeah i know the 1st 2 pics are the same i accidently uploaded the same one twice. The other one was a big orang tractor that turned out pretty sweet i will up load it later and let ya all look. Thanks for the tips and the props.
Cowboy
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SumoPope
location: Cleveland Gender: Male
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
| | | Re: just a feeble try <Reply # 10 on 6/24/2007 6:20 PM >
| | | Move the center in 1 + 2 to include the shadow of the tractor, get lower to the ground. You don't {i]have[/i] to get the shadow of the tractor, I think it just might add to the picture. Watch out for whats in the background, I see a trailer park that is just in the upper right hand corner that could be either the entire background for a context of scene or eliminated to produce a context of country desolation. Great lighting and sky! I would have moved the camera slightly more to the left in #3, but very nice tone and subject overall, IMHO.
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