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studioeeg location: Westport, CT Gender: Male \| \|	Need An Opinion < on 1/25/2007 3:30 AM >

	Scrap yard in Norwalk, CT. I don't know what to think of this picture.

IrIsHmOm location: San Joaquin Valley, CA Gender: Female I'll kill your face... \| \| \|	Re: Need An Opinion <Reply # 1 on 1/25/2007 4:51 AM >

	I like the reflection, but overall, kinda boring. sorry...

Vinsanity location: NJ Gender: Male \|	Re: Need An Opinion <Reply # 2 on 1/25/2007 5:15 AM >

	You're a little off-skew with it. I would've rotated clock-wise a slight little bit, and then taken the photo at a different ISO. What you have here is a blown-out sky with a slightly off-center photo. That bothers me. Exposure and composition matter so much. You need to put more time into both. Who doesn't want to shoot fire from their ass?

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Re: Need An Opinion
<Reply # 3 on 1/25/2007 6:10 AM >

Posted by studioeeg
Scrap yard in Norwalk, CT. I don't know what to think of this picture.

I'd suggest a crop to straighten it out, and convert it to b&w. Something about the color is both flat and distracting. I think it coudl work as a toned or b&w photo tho.

"The extraordinary beauty of things that fail." - Heinrich von Kleist

studioeeg location: Westport, CT Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Need An Opinion <Reply # 4 on 1/25/2007 12:34 PM >

	thanks for all the feedback.

Alias location: UK Gender: Male www.nicholas-ada ms.co.uk \| \|	Re: Need An Opinion <Reply # 5 on 1/25/2007 1:33 PM >

	as others have said crop it either vertically or horizontally so all you have is a row of ones. then I would desaturate it but not completely leaving a hint of colour there. www.nicholas-adams.co.uk

Vinsanity location: NJ Gender: Male \|	Re: Need An Opinion <Reply # 6 on 1/25/2007 1:49 PM >

	I like the desaturation idea. Maybe leave the yellow car saturated for the Shindlers List effect. Who doesn't want to shoot fire from their ass?

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Re: Need An Opinion
<Reply # 7 on 1/25/2007 2:04 PM >

Posted by Vinsanity
I like the desaturation idea.
Maybe leave the yellow car saturated for the Shindlers List effect.

i thought about that but i thought its a bit clique, im not a fan of doing it but ill give it a shot.

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