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studioeeg location: Westport, CT Gender: Male \| \|	Scatterd < on 1/14/2007 5:07 AM >

	I am new here so im just getting my work out there. These are some scattered images from different places, im going to post photo sets of some different locations i have explored but here is a taste of what i have completed. Tell me what I did terribly wrong. [last edit 1/14/2007 5:10 AM by studioeeg - edited 2 times]

IrIsHmOm location: San Joaquin Valley, CA Gender: Female I'll kill your face... \| \| \|	Re: Scatterd <Reply # 1 on 1/14/2007 5:46 AM >

	I'm pretty new too, but here's what I see: 1) blown out window. painful to look at.... 2) I like it. Nice subject and color. 3) Just not eye-catching to me... Maybe get it from a different angle. Straight-forward doesn't work here. I have a lot to live up to on here, so I can't say a whole lot. The more experienced can give you more pointers and better critique. I just like to give my opinion, because I like to have opinions on my own work. Hopefully this helped! Look forward to seeing more from you!

robdobi \| \| \|	Re: Scatterd <Reply # 2 on 1/14/2007 6:26 PM >

	is #3 in derby / shelton? looks awfully familiar. dobi.nu / fullbleed.org - series 12 now available. / flickr / tumblr / prints for sale

rsolimeo location: Philly \|	Re: Scatterd <Reply # 3 on 1/14/2007 6:39 PM >

	these are pretty interesting pics... here are my suggestions. 1. i love the detail on the walls, but the light coming through the window is crazy. 2. Interesting subject, i would just try another angle, the composition is just not doing anything for me. 3. another compositional problem for me, less ground, and include the entire machine. the scale is cool, but you dont need so much dirt. over all a good start. just one thing to keep in mind. Keep an open mind, and take the critism as you want to. Pictures are for you first, then for everyone else. if you are here to take pics that everyone else likes then you will no last very long. these are your pic, do and shoot what you like!!! "Exploration is really the essence of human existence." [Frank Broman] http://flickr.com/photos/rsolimeo http://www.myspace.com/ryansolimeo

IrIsHmOm

location:
San Joaquin Valley, CA
Gender: Female

I'll kill your face...

Re: Scatterd
<Reply # 4 on 1/14/2007 6:44 PM >

Posted by rsolimeo

Keep an open mind, and take the critism as you want to. Pictures are for you first, then for everyone else. if you are here to take pics that everyone else likes then you will no last very long. these are your pic, do and shoot what you like!!!

Also, read through some other critiques and you'll see that some of it will help in your own work! SOmetimes what's said about somebody else's work can reflect your own.

studioeeg

location:
Westport, CT
Gender: Male

Re: Scatterd
<Reply # 5 on 1/14/2007 9:47 PM >

Posted by robdobi
is #3 in derby / shelton? looks awfully familiar.

actually Troy, NY

thanks to everyone who has been looking at my photos.

rsolimeo

location:
Philly

Re: Scatterd
<Reply # 6 on 1/15/2007 3:43 AM >

Posted by IrIsHmOm

Also, read through some other critiques and you'll see that some of it will help in your own work! SOmetimes what's said about somebody else's work can reflect your own.

i second this whole heartedly...

"Exploration is really the essence of human existence." [Frank Broman]

http://flickr.com/photos/rsolimeo http://www.myspace.com/ryansolimeo

Captain Hook location: philadelphia Gender: Male \|	Re: Scatterd <Reply # 7 on 1/15/2007 4:46 PM >

	Number 2 and 3 are awsome, the plow truck in number three looks like its about to hit the bike and thats cool, Number two has cool lighting and an awsome angle, and number one would be cool but its that window being to blow out thats getting to me. avast ye matties there is a squall aloof. Brace the jib and batten down the hatches! yarrrrr!!!

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