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ph0to
   
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 |  |  | Not quite UE, but it kind of is?
< on 1/7/2007 9:52 PM >
|  | | | I was walking along some train tracks not used anymore and was just taking pictures. None of these are edited, I was playing around with the new polarizer I picked up the other day, any advice/ anything on these would be nice.
edit: Removed one picture
[last edit 1/7/2007 9:53 PM by ph0to - edited 1 times]
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IrIsHmOm
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San Joaquin Valley, CA
Gender: Female
I'll kill your face...
| | |  | Re: Not quite UE, but it kind of is?
<Reply # 1 on 1/7/2007 10:39 PM >
| | | | I really like the second one... The others don't really stand out to me..
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xclone
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| | Re: Not quite UE, but it kind of is?
<Reply # 2 on 1/8/2007 1:31 AM >
| | | | #1 - I like the lines of the shot but there's no real good focal point of the picture. The wheat straw drops out of focus too quickly which causes your eye to drop off). It looks like this is an evening photograph.. maybe take it another 15-20 minutes to get better/warmer colors.
#2 - Again, nice lines but when you're working with symmetrical lines, make sure they are framed dead even (You're off to the right just a bit). I'd also place your horizon about 2/3rd's up the frame instead of in the middle (rule of thirds). Good colors, shadows and texture though!
#3 - Nice shot but the soft-focus is a bit distracting. I definitely like how you've got the shot framed out and the colors you picked up. This one has tons of potential if you can sharpen it up.
I hope this helps.. I definitely like the set.
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ph0to
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Massachuestts
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Not quite UE, but it kind of is?
<Reply # 3 on 1/8/2007 1:41 AM >
| | | | thanks a lot!
I didnt even think about the rule of thirds, I tend to forget things sometimes
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