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hedd location: Ottawa, ON, CA Gender: Male \| \|	Help me improve! < on 9/6/2006 2:54 AM >

	A handful from a couple of recent trips: Anything I should have done differently? Or not done at all? 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Bigger versions on Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bdg/sets/ All comments appreciated. - BG

nobody location: VANCOUVER B.C. Gender: Male 5:55 is a state of mind \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 1 on 9/6/2006 2:07 PM >

	They look pretty nice to me. N. Operating Entirely With Bad Intentions

hedd location: Ottawa, ON, CA Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 2 on 9/6/2006 6:51 PM >

	Thanks! So what does it take to get the elites to come out of the woodwork and tear into my photos? - BG

Pembroke location: Parkville, MD Gender: Male \| \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 3 on 9/6/2006 7:53 PM >

	It's a very nice set all in all. I think #4 is the weakest. It could be sharper, maybe up the contrast; it just looks blurry to me. I love #7 but what is that blue thing in the bottom right hand corner? I find it kind of distracting but maybe it couldn't be moved. Maybe you could have framed it differently so it's not half in the shot? I live in the weak and the wounded...doc.

controleman location: Montreal Gender: Male \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 4 on 9/6/2006 8:21 PM >

	There is too much highlights in your photography try doing some HDR, photoshop or photomatix work well. But please don't do some cheap work with it. Also, don't do them too irrealistic. I mean... exemple: Bad use/ Good Use If I didn't used High dynamic range it may looked like this: The dark zone is correct but the white are blasted The sand looks better in the bad use but the rest is aweful, but that's just my personal opinion. Otherwise your composition is great just try to take care of blasted white. [last edit 9/6/2006 8:24 PM by controleman - edited 1 times]

levacas location: Hamilton and KW Gender: Female Exploring the hidden, secret and forgotten nooks and crannies of society. \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 5 on 9/6/2006 9:18 PM >

	Number 1 would look excellent if you made it black and white and enhanced the highlights in the image. 2. Is perfect. 3. Is not bad. 4. Again, enhance the brightness and would look good in B&W 5. Is perfect. 6. Is not too bad. Something seems kind of off about it but I cant put my finger on it. 7. Is great. 8. is fabulous!! A Steel town girl is not afraid to get dirty

Majickal location: Evansville, Indiana Gender: Male <3 Home Depot \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 6 on 9/11/2006 6:16 PM >

	I think they're all pretty good, I especially like 2. The only thing I caught was #4 being a bit blurry. Good job though, looks like a fun site. Edited: 2 instead of 3. [last edit 9/11/2006 6:17 PM by Majickal - edited 1 times] This is the sig

lindsayphoto location: philly Gender: Female \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 7 on 9/12/2006 3:35 AM >

	6 is very creative in framing. I'd say that's actually my favorite and well done/thought out or maybe just lucky.

location:
Ottawa, ON, CA
Gender: Male

Re: Help me improve!
<Reply # 8 on 9/12/2006 12:13 PM >

Posted by lindsayphoto
... or maybe just lucky.

Like how, I just happened to point the camera through the window?

A big thanks to everyone for the feedback, I appreciate it!

- BG

gnarkill location: North Carolina Gender: Male Olaf, Berserker. Girls think sexy. \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 9 on 9/14/2006 5:56 PM >

	3 and 4 are sick, you gotta good eye for lighting

kjohnnytarr location: Columbia, Missouri Gender: Male Team Asbestos: CoMO \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 10 on 9/14/2006 6:05 PM >

	6 is way the coolness It seemed like a good idea at the time...

DeMiNe0 location: Brooklyn, NY Gender: Male DeMiNe0.CoM \| \| \| \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 11 on 9/15/2006 7:36 PM >

	I love 8. Is that a wide angel lens? Or just not cropped down? [last edit 9/15/2006 7:37 PM by DeMiNe0 - edited 1 times] HtTp://WwW.DeMiNe0.CoM

location:
Ottawa, ON, CA
Gender: Male

Re: Help me improve!
<Reply # 12 on 9/16/2006 12:35 AM >

Posted by DeMiNe0
I love 8. Is that a wide angel lens? Or just not cropped down?

I actually used AutoStitch - it's five or six photos, then cropped.

Thanks for the feedback everybody!

- BG

Moxx location: Massachusetts Gender: Female The kid with the chemicals \| \|	Re: Help me improve! <Reply # 13 on 9/16/2006 12:38 AM >

	I like 'em. Known some call is air am.