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tron_2.0
   
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Ohio
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 20 on 8/22/2006 4:49 AM >
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No I do, thanks for your comments.
Like the demo work??
I'll remember this stuff next time I get to go out and UE though.
Keep em' commin!!
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Well, I'm not 100% sure what you mean by that, but I would say, for example the barrels you could shoot some pretty cool photographs centered around them. Try to avoid stray windows because of the exposure latitude of digital, try to elimate to many wide shots. I know its probably impressive standing there, but unfortuantely its hard to capture it all into a little frame and make a photograph that is easy on the eyes.
Find some machines, staircases, pits, etc and focus on shooting them exclusively.
[quote][i]Posted by yokes[/i]
I find your lack of coziness.... disturbing.
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bryciekun
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<Reply # 21 on 8/22/2006 8:11 PM >
| | | | i like them.
especially number 4.
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Corporal_Clegg
  
location:
Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: *Changes title in hopes of some critique*
<Reply # 22 on 8/25/2006 10:18 PM >
| | | | Well, I'm not 100% sure what you mean by that, but I would say, for example the barrels you could shoot some pretty cool photographs centered around them. Try to avoid stray windows because of the exposure latitude of digital, try to elimate to many wide shots. I know its probably impressive standing there, but unfortuantely its hard to capture it all into a little frame and make a photograph that is easy on the eyes.
Find some machines, staircases, pits, etc and focus on shooting them exclusively.
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Thanks man, I'll remember that next time.
i like them.
especially number 4. |
Thanks.
Now, Im off to edit these some more.
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Corporal_Clegg
location:
Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: *Changes title in hopes of some critique*
<Reply # 23 on 8/25/2006 10:57 PM >
| | | | I re-edited two of them:
The backgrounds god damn bright ^^ =/
[last edit 8/26/2006 5:10 AM by Corporal_Clegg - edited 1 times]
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sarnelefant
location:
Navarre, FL
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 24 on 8/26/2006 11:54 AM >
| | | | I think the cropping of these two are....better....but did you happen to notice that the highlights in the first edited image now look purple? I like the originals you posted a lot more. The colors appear more natural and the density and tonality are more even. You don't need lots of contrast and funky colors to make a good photo.
Why do you feel like you need to do any editing on these? I really think you should take the suggestions that people have made about how to compose and evaluate the image while you're shooting it and put these images to their rest. You're not going to get much more out of them than what is there.
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hedd
location:
Ottawa, ON, CA
Gender: Male
| | | Re: *Changes title in hopes of some critique*
<Reply # 25 on 8/27/2006 9:15 PM >
| | | | Well there's nothing wrong with some extra Photoshop practice.
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