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take a walk with me
< on 8/5/2006 12:43 AM >
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Photos taken from about 6:30pm-7:30pm. Used a Sony DSC-T1 that was taped to a tripod for some shots lol. Not too sure about these pictures, but thought id share them.

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3. Cmon i had to include myself :o



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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 1 on 8/5/2006 12:58 AM >
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did you turn up the contrast on #1? if you did, then you also need to turn down the brightness. turn it down anyway.

#2 is the best of the three, but the lighting is just gray and icky. same with #1.

#3. hi there. nice picture.
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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 2 on 8/5/2006 1:02 AM >
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So then you think it was just a lighting issue here? What do you think about the different angles, etc?

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 3 on 8/5/2006 5:51 AM >
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Posted by cwestcivic5
So then you think it was just a lighting issue here? What do you think about the different angles, etc?


well i see you tried those 2 different angles on the same subject. i think the second one is best because it has depth to it. in the first one, everything is the same distance away from the camera, and it makes the picture seem flat and plain

the depth in the second one is accentuated by the use of selective focus. by focusing only on the nearest gas meter, and blurring out the background, you've created a place for my eye to zone in on.

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 4 on 8/5/2006 7:46 AM >
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Number three is the only one I care for. The first two are kind of boring but the third is just a good shot. The background isn't very distracting and it's funny in a way. I like the choice of black and white, and your angle. I normally really dislike photos with people in them, but in this case, your presence makes the photo. Good shot.

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 5 on 8/6/2006 2:32 AM >
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wasnt so sure about posting this one either, but i guess its good if i just post it so you can give me some advice about it.



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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 6 on 8/6/2006 2:51 AM >
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um thats actually my favorite.

its colorful and dramatic. it doesnt have that dull gray lighting. its got nice shapes, and it fills the picture nicely.

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 7 on 8/6/2006 4:03 AM >
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lol who woulda thunk?

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 8 on 8/6/2006 4:31 AM >
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Posted by I am the Bear
um thats actually my favorite.

its colorful and dramatic. it doesnt have that dull gray lighting. its got nice shapes, and it fills the picture nicely.


Agreed. It's bold and interesting. Good shadows, light, color, and repeating shapes.

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 9 on 8/7/2006 3:27 AM >
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Posted by I am the Bear


well i see you tried those 2 different angles on the same subject. i think the second one is best because it has depth to it. in the first one, everything is the same distance away from the camera, and it makes the picture seem flat and plain

the depth in the second one is accentuated by the use of selective focus. by focusing only on the nearest gas meter, and blurring out the background, you've created a place for my eye to zone in on.



True, very true. I thought the first one was a little conventional too. Good thing i took the second type eh??? Well i tried to fix the brightness on the first one and i think it looks better. Funny how the one i thought was the worst turned out to be ur guy's favorite? Well lets tear this series to hell.



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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 10 on 8/7/2006 3:56 AM >
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the new one is a little better to look at, but the vertical pipes are still so dark. i dont think you should concentrate much more energy on it since its kind of a dead end anyway, seeing as how it has no depth.

keep taking em

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 11 on 8/7/2006 4:37 AM >
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Yeah ill keep trying. Hey, im bound to break through someday! Plus i think out of my 4 posts ive improved a bit and i have a few good shots taken. Maybe this week il check out an abandoned amusement park about 25 min from my house.

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Re: take a walk with me
<Reply # 12 on 8/7/2006 2:29 PM >
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um thats actually my favorite.

its colorful and dramatic. it doesnt have that dull gray lighting. its got nice shapes, and it fills the picture nicely.


I agree, I like the contrast of the pipes and its shadows. Off-centering things can make a dramatic difference.

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<Reply # 13 on 8/7/2006 4:57 PM >
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Yeah, the shadows were so clear i thought it would be a waste unless i included them in the photo as well.

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