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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr) (Viewed 243 times)
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Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
< on 8/3/2006 8:57 PM >
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Tell me what you think of the combination of light hdr, night, and b&w.
full set here: http://www.forbidd...ces.be/explo50.php

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 1 on 8/3/2006 9:00 PM >
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Yo thats one hell of a cool view. NICE PICS

PS: howd you get your pictures so big?
[last edit 8/3/2006 9:04 PM by distorted void - edited 1 times]

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 2 on 8/3/2006 9:57 PM >
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I'm no expert, but here's my two cents:

#1. By far my favourite. Would have been cooler if it have been symmetric, but I can see you're on a roof there so I'm guessing it wasn't possible? Good detail and colour though; looks like something rendered from a cool video game or something.

#2 is okay, but there isn't much to hold my attention.

#3 - good, but the one posted on the first page of your site is far cooler

#4 - I would have left this out, or focused entirely on the archway, closer up. The plywood is distracting and not too interesting.

On #5 I would have rotated to level your horizon and cropped some of the bottom blackness off to draw your attention upwards more.

#6 good colors but I would have cropped the left side down a bit... and maybe rotated as well. Not sure if you were going for the angle, but it looks accidental.

#7 - I would have made this a portrait-orientation shot and left the whole right side out. The ceiling is cool.

Some of the other shots on the site you linked to are fantastic though! Great work.

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 3 on 8/4/2006 7:38 AM >
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I really like the blend. Great stuff. My jaw actually dropped at the first one.

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 4 on 8/4/2006 1:50 PM >
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stunning mate...really my kind of picture!

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 5 on 8/4/2006 10:20 PM >
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no critique to offer just a great set and outstanding locations thanks

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Re: Palais de Chaillot (rooftop/night/paris/france/...& hdr)
<Reply # 6 on 8/5/2006 6:33 PM >
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Posted by hedd
I'm no expert, but here's my two cents:

#1. By far my favourite. Would have been cooler if it have been symmetric, but I can see you're on a roof there so I'm guessing it wasn't possible? Good detail and colour though; looks like something rendered from a cool video game or something.

#2 is okay, but there isn't much to hold my attention.

#3 - good, but the one posted on the first page of your site is far cooler

#4 - I would have left this out, or focused entirely on the archway, closer up. The plywood is distracting and not too interesting.

On #5 I would have rotated to level your horizon and cropped some of the bottom blackness off to draw your attention upwards more.

#6 good colors but I would have cropped the left side down a bit... and maybe rotated as well. Not sure if you were going for the angle, but it looks accidental.

#7 - I would have made this a portrait-orientation shot and left the whole right side out. The ceiling is cool.

Some of the other shots on the site you linked to are fantastic though! Great work.



To get picture BIG, you have to host them, not to upload them to UER

Hedd, thanks for your comments, I found them very constructive.
Some replies:
1- indeed, it was tough
3- yeah, i was too lazy to post the large one from the site, it was already resized to small
4- agreed
5- i like it like, i think a shorter "black region" would have disturbed the whole balance of the picture
6- nope it was on purpose

Cheers, Slyv


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