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Jezebel
location:
TX
Gender: Female
cookie ninja
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< on 7/31/2006 4:48 PM >
|  | | | here is another selection of photos i took while exploring abandoned areas. some of these are a little bit older, and looking back on them i can see how they could be better.
unfortunately there isn't an opportunity to retake some of these pics because they started to rebuild the area. it's all fixed up now and i hear they even host parties and weddings there, haha.
random weirdness after hours:
Photos: http://www.autofocus.us
Paintings: http://www.pocketmole.com |
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prometheus
   
location:
New England
Gender: Male
UER, a big pissing contest.
| | | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 1 on 7/31/2006 6:03 PM >
| | | | #1. I see how the bottom of the door is aligned with the picture, but the two lines across the top grab my attention and they aren't aligned.
#2. I like this but maybe pan so I can see more of the broken glass.
#3. Nice natural light, but maybe crop out more of the top and right.
#4. I like it, but crop out the whatever at the very top of the shot, its distracting.
#5. Meh, it works.
#6. Maybe I'll understand it some day... probably not though.
Leave only footprints, take only pictures... unless its like really cool. |
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I am the Bear
 
location:
Seattle Wa
Gender: Male
| | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 2 on 8/1/2006 8:29 AM >
| | | | #4 is exposed very well, so that the details and textures are clearly visible, but its just not interesting subject matter
#5 is my favorite, i love how all the colors seem to be the same hue. it unifies the picture.
the rest are fine. #3 i think would be improved if you took the picture further standing further to the right, so that the pillar wasnt interrupting the composition. i think it detracts rather than adds to the set. there is also a lot of empty space that my eye gets lost in.
#6: street mime? this is awesome. i'm jealous. the mood is very tangible, the posture, the mask, the colors, the nighttime setting. its amazing.
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dwagon
location:
Fort Worth Texas
Gender: Male
They call it Junk, I call it art
| | | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 3 on 8/2/2006 6:47 PM >
| | | | Yeah the mime is my favorite, amazing what you can find at night.
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levacas
location:
Hamilton and KW
Gender: Female
Exploring the hidden, secret and forgotten nooks and crannies of society.
| | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 4 on 8/2/2006 8:12 PM >
| | | | Cool pictures.
Number 1. Not the best but I like the angle you took it at.
#2. Is just kinda plain to me.
#3 and 4 are really cool, theyre totally something I would shoot.
and #5 Is wicked! I totally love it. So much like, emotion lol good lighting. Its perfect! Im jealous of that one!
A Steel town girl is not afraid to get dirty |
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levacas
location:
Hamilton and KW
Gender: Female
Exploring the hidden, secret and forgotten nooks and crannies of society.
| | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 5 on 8/2/2006 8:14 PM >
| | | | Posted by levacas
Cool pictures.
Number 1. Not the best, been done many a time.
#2. Is just kinda plain to me.
#3. Is kinda boring.
#4 and 5 are really cool, theyre totally something I would shoot.
and #6 Is wicked! I totally love it. So much like, emotion lol good lighting. Its perfect! Im jealous of that one!
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A Steel town girl is not afraid to get dirty |
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cwestcivic5
location:
Michigan
Gender: Male
| | Re: more desolation
<Reply # 6 on 8/2/2006 11:07 PM >
| | | | The only one i can offer suggestions on is the first one. The angle isnt the greatest and it is a bit crooked. Maybe crop out the ground. Rest are pretty damn good. I love the last one. The colors and posture fit the mood perfectly.
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