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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique (Viewed 408 times)
JonnyVpa 


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Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique
< on 3/19/2006 9:09 PM >
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i need some critique..... im gonna go nuts unless I can get some Feedback

Heres the site

http://www.photogeek.homestead.com/

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lasthourstand 


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Re: Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique
<Reply # 1 on 3/19/2006 11:28 PM >
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I think your black and white has a few major problems. The contrasts are either inflated to the point where you losing all detail in the highlights and shadows, or they lay too flat. I also think you've gotta work on composition. Many of the photos are taken at very straight forward angles. The house photos are more of a documentation then fine art. Your color photos look a little soft and have the same composition problems. Now that I've probably made you think I'm being an asshole, I want to let you know that I think you show promise in the nature photos. Try some interesting angles and tone down/up your filter to get the maximum amount of detail out of every print. Keep it up!

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Re: Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique
<Reply # 2 on 3/20/2006 6:35 PM >
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They're a mixed bag, but what is up from your thumbnails? one looked like satellite photography of a river but when clicked on it was a chain link fence.

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Re: Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique
<Reply # 3 on 3/21/2006 3:26 AM >
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Sorry about the thumbnails.... the sitebuilder im using really doesnt give them much clarity when they are bigger... im workin on fixing it.... btw those pictures arent my best stuff... im in the process of getting all my film put onto cd's but moneys been tight lately.... soon though there will be MANY UE pictures up on that site at least 120 of them hopefully by the end of may they will all be copied to cd and photoshoped

Thanks for the critique though


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Re: Pentax K1000 Pics Need some Critique
<Reply # 4 on 3/22/2006 1:24 AM >
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I'd advise against using homestead, personally.

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