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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Reflexion (Viewed 369 times)
Mickael 


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Reflexion
< on 2/22/2006 2:13 AM >
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Okay so here's my try with reflexion. The building is an active location that I roofed.

There is not any digital processing but the processing required to reduce the picture size.



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I'd like your inputs on theses pictures.

Thanks

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 1 on 2/22/2006 7:36 PM >
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Good job capturing the reflections. Compositionally, the fourth shot is the weakest - the others have strong diagonals or interesting vertical elements (and I love the one with the tree).

The fourth shot does do an excellent job of showing the depth of the clouds, what with the sun behind them.

Every one of the shots feels a bit dark to me, except for the second. See if you can lighten the others to match that one.

Lastly, on the fifth shot, I'd say you might want to re-take that with a narrower depth of field, trying to throw either the building or the trees out of focus.

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 2 on 2/22/2006 7:51 PM >
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#5
very interesting
this photo almost has a split personality

tree - building
natural - man-made
random - uniform
rabbit - blender

okay, so maybe i added the last one for kicks

i only wish that it was the same exposure as #3

oh, and the clouds are nice

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 3 on 2/24/2006 3:38 AM >
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Thanks a lot for the comments guys !

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 4 on 2/24/2006 11:55 PM >
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Those are some clean windows...

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 5 on 3/2/2006 2:50 AM >
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They're great photos. Actually, if the company in the building is leasing space or anything, you might want to sell them for advertising, they look like great ad photos.
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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 6 on 3/2/2006 3:53 AM >
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great job capturing the reflexion of the clouds. I like the 5th photos out of this collection, to me the tree makes this photo more interesting. the composition in this collection is amazing! I like the 3rd one because of the composition, love the angle in this photo. In the 4th photo, i like how you can see the sun and the exposure is good. I wish it was like that for the rest of the photos.

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 7 on 3/2/2006 1:00 PM >
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whoa dude! Very cool subject matter! I love it! It's always interesting to see a new twist on photographing buildings!

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Re: Reflexion
<Reply # 8 on 3/3/2006 2:45 PM >
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Nice pictures! Looks like something I'd see on a business website. Nice reflections. I don't like the tree in the last one, though.

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