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Squidgit
      
location:
Brighton Ontario
Gender: Female
There is not a sprig of grass that shoots uninteresting to me
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< on 2/17/2006 3:10 PM >
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#2
#3
The richness I achieve comes from Nature, the source of my inspiration. |
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ednothing
| | | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 1 on 2/17/2006 3:11 PM >
| | | | I think three would've been better if it was more centered and hadn't cut off the top.
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0U812
location:
Lubbock, TX
Gender: Female
Texploration
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<Reply # 2 on 2/17/2006 3:21 PM >
| | | | Beautiful!
I figured out what's wrong with life:
It's other people. |
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nobody
location:
VANCOUVER B.C.
Gender: Male
5:55 is a state of mind
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 3 on 2/17/2006 3:51 PM >
| | | | # 1 is awesome, I mean I really love it. # 2 feels a little bright on my eyes. I like #3 too I am just commenting, I do not have any advice as I am not a photographer. N.
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laslow
location:
Tewksbury, MA
you have quite a temper for someone who takes pictures of flowers
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 4 on 2/17/2006 4:05 PM >
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crooked, boring, nice roof, the colors are nice on this one
#2
overexposed, ohh, my eyes
#3
horrid perspective, as stated earlier; it's off center, and stop taking pictures like this. just stop. now.
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Squidgit
location:
Brighton Ontario
Gender: Female
There is not a sprig of grass that shoots uninteresting to me
| | | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 5 on 2/17/2006 5:32 PM >
| | | | Its my first time taking pictres like this, hehe give me a break! but thank you all for your comments so far
The richness I achieve comes from Nature, the source of my inspiration. |
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Hi/Po
location:
Earth
Gender: Male
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 6 on 2/18/2006 12:04 AM >
| | | | I wouldn't change anything on number 1, it's refined and polished. Nice composition. I hate the overexposure in both the second and third ones, the lack of details is disappointing. The perspective is rather disappointing on the third one, may I suggest, if possible, shooting it head on with more brick? Based off the washed out tones, it was taken on a cloudy day. Try it again on a sunny day, even if you lose the reflection of the clouds. It could still be a great picture (albeit different) on a sunny day.
In response to Laslow, the crookedness of the shack adds to the effect because it compliments the delapidated nature of the shack. It's subtle, it adds interst.
Sorry there are no "breaks" in photo critique  . I try to be polite and thoughtful though.
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Nelles22
location:
Nashville, TN
Gender: Male
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 7 on 2/18/2006 2:57 AM >
| | | | #1 is great!!!!
2 and 3 just don't do it for me. Keep shootin!
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Ninjako
location:
Winnipeg
Gender: Male
I Wonder What's In Here
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 8 on 2/26/2006 5:48 PM >
| | | | I agree.. The first 2 are interesting but number 3 is definitely a bore. I would try shooting it at an angle, the shot you took does nothing for me.
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trojansxc91
Gender: Male
| | Re: Warming up three you.
<Reply # 9 on 2/28/2006 9:39 PM >
| | | | i like the first two, and the third is a good subject, but i think it would have been better if it was more centered and was taken straight-on, not an an angle
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