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350D
  
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Toronto Ontario
Gender: Male
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< on 12/2/2005 5:22 PM >
|  | | | Here are a couple more shots i got over the last couple months, what do u think...
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nobody
    
location:
VANCOUVER B.C.
Gender: Male
5:55 is a state of mind
| | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 1 on 12/2/2005 5:40 PM >
| | | | Like I have said before, I am not qualified to critique anyones photos, but I found these extremely good ,and very enjoyable to look at. N.
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Alvin
location:
Montreal
Gender: Male
Photography & Sound
| | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 2 on 12/2/2005 6:35 PM >
| | | | In genera they are good , some of them need to be reframed or cropped to get distracting elements out of the picture, some of them would be even stronger if you have tilted the camera , but this can still be fixed by cropping but not really recommended that way since you will lose pixels and wont be able to blow up the picture as much if you intend to do enlargements of it
edit : some of them are missing a subject, or I don't really get what you are shooting in the picture , although it is good , we still don't get what we are supposed to be understanding from the picture
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what
location:
Texas
Gender: Male
RE - Rural Exploration
| | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 3 on 12/2/2005 8:52 PM >
| | | | good set. the one that stands out the most to me is the red barn/mill - beautiful colors, nice composition and a definite subject. and the neighborhood watch sign, its as if the neighborhood is just watching that house decay.
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Glass
location:
Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 4 on 12/5/2005 6:22 PM >
| | | | This might get a better response in the, uhh, critique board.
My favorite is the last, and I'm not crazy about that one. I can't find any balance in shape/line/color or composure in the photos... that's a big thing for me. So I would have to say that I don't like them as-is. With crops a few would work because you show some good technical skills.
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Obscura
Gender: Male
Nikonwhore
| | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 5 on 12/5/2005 7:28 PM >
| | | | sorry, there are too many shots posted at once to go through and critique each one.
Post a couple at a time... just my suggestion.
Obscura
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dsankt
location:
live and in the fresh
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<Reply # 6 on 12/6/2005 10:16 PM >
| | | | Ug I agree with Obscura - too many photos. Pick a couple you like instead of dumping so many.
Going L->R,T->B
I like the texture and tones in the 4th shot the rough wooden construction appeals to me. I would have liked the door cracked open a touch, to give a glimpse of what it hides.
Otherwise I just find them snapshots, either empty rooms which lack character or shots without a strong subject.
ds
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morgansteph
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Washington DC
Gender: Female
| | Re: PHOTOS needing critiqueing
<Reply # 7 on 12/6/2005 10:20 PM >
| | | | Def. Not bad. Also agree that a few are missing a real subject, but I like them nonetheless.
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