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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > a couple of shots (Viewed 301 times)

350D

location:
Toronto Ontario
Gender: Male

a couple of shots
< on 11/29/2005 2:11 PM >

Im new to this site and thought this critique thing was cool so here you go. Keep in mind i dont really understand the very technical aspect of photography (i dont even own photoshop), but what the hell...

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Glass location: Chicago as one does \| \|	Re: a couple of shots <Reply # 1 on 11/29/2005 2:21 PM >

	In the first picture I really love the specular light. What I don't like is the composition: it doesn't seem refined--more like a snapshot than 'artsy.' It's not balanced in shape, tone, or line so the resulting image is chaotic. I think a 20 degrees tilt with a closeup on something of interest would help a lot. The second selection is print-worthy! The only thing I'd do is pop the contrast a little bit, bust to make the shadows of the stairs pop a little! Great job! Oh-as per presentation: try to get a black texture border on it... it would help a lot. PS isn't a must for this.

Greg location: Canada Gender: Male How is this even 'exploration'? It's a loving house you've already been in you weirdo! \| \|	Re: a couple of shots <Reply # 2 on 11/29/2005 7:33 PM >

	Photo two is the better one out of the two.

Dowcet

location:
Middletown, ct

Re: a couple of shots
<Reply # 3 on 11/30/2005 12:30 AM >

Posted by mynameisglass
In the first picture I really love the specular light. What I don't like is the composition: it doesn't seem refined--more like a snapshot than 'artsy.' It's not balanced in shape, tone, or line so the resulting image is chaotic.

I would disagree, personally, I think #1 is a great composition. #2 seems little out of focus actually, but its really nice overall. I think glass is right that the contrast or something needs to be tweaked just a bit.

350D location: Toronto Ontario Gender: Male \| \|	Re: a couple of shots <Reply # 4 on 11/30/2005 12:48 AM >

	thnks for the input. The first picture was kinda rushed, it was taken up at CFB Foymount in norther Ontario. I had someone busting my balls to leave so i didnt have much time to take pictures. that place would defintly be worth going back with some more time.The second one is blurry now that i see it. My rebel XT's been acting up so i duno. Anyone know wat ERROR 02 means?

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