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Smash Adams
     
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There's a bomb in the lasagna?!
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< on 11/25/2005 10:14 PM >
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Random pictures. Most of my photos were wiped out in one of my computer's reformats.
Some more random pictures could be found on my unused dA account:
http://unclawedlobster.deviantart.com/gallery/
Edit: Eh, I can't get the gallery tag to work. So, try shuffling around in that link above =/
[last edit 11/25/2005 10:24 PM by Smash Adams - edited 6 times]
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desmann
location:
NJ
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 1 on 11/25/2005 10:37 PM >
| | | | I like the sunset one
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baleze
 
location:
Montreal
Gender: Male
I don't really hate children. I just can't finish a whole one.
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<Reply # 2 on 11/25/2005 10:54 PM >
| | | | This forum was partially made in order to avoid these kinds of three words critiques. C'mon, let's be constructive! It might take more time and effort but that's why where're here.
I checked your stuff but damn, I hate how Deviantart is slow for non-members. The sepia stuff looks great, especially the one with the fence. But be careful with landscapes pictures as yours quickly get redundant.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15516997/
This, for example, shows definitely too much grass. It takes about 2/3 of the image when it should take less than a third and show more of the scrap cars.
Anyways, if you have particular pictures you'd want critiqued, post them here. As I said, Deviantart is crappy for browsing.
[last edit 11/25/2005 10:55 PM by baleze - edited 1 times]
http://www.flickr....otos/30228457@N05/
http://baleze.deviantart.com/
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desmann
location:
NJ
Gender: Male
| | | Re: Critique away!
<Reply # 4 on 11/26/2005 12:10 AM >
| | | | Posted by baleze
This forum was partially made in order to avoid these kinds of three words critiques. C'mon, let's be constructive! It might take more time and effort but that's why where're here.
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Just playing.
Now for the picture
http://www.deviant...eviation/15133360/
It could use a little more cloud definition, a filter or two would work nicely. Also you may want to get a little more sunset into the shot to really make the contrast jump out.
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Redknight
location:
Missouri
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 5 on 11/26/2005 4:50 AM >
| | | | Alot of them are pretty uninteresting.
"Road to nowhere" I see the shadow of a photographer!  Not sure if it was intended or not, if so, the shadows of the trees across the road draw attention away from it.
Im really liking "Behind the white line" You nailed the shot for contrast and brightness. Being picky, you could have rotated the angle of the shot alittle to the left, or just crop alittle off the right side. Alittle more symmetry would make it that much better. Then that metal strip or duct on the ceiling of the bus would be right in the center and there wouldnt be more chair-age on the right side of the shot.
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binaryzero
location:
Chicago, IL
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 6 on 11/28/2005 12:08 AM >
| | | | Road to Abandonment:
I this shot, nice parallel lines on the fence and horizon broken by the trail. I think it could have been a lot better had you gotten 2/3 above the horizon instead of 2/3 below it. Oh, nice contrast between the trail beyond the gate and that before it.
Most of your photos are great, I just think sepia tone in the woods comes out to boring for me.
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