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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > First Critique (Viewed 146 times)
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First Critique
< on 2/3/2014 11:24 PM >
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So I'm new and have never had photos critiqued before so I will just start with one. Thank you ahead of time!



[last edit 2/3/2014 11:40 PM by Urbanexso - edited 2 times]

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Re: First Critique
<Reply # 1 on 2/3/2014 11:27 PM >
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It's small...

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Re: First Critique
<Reply # 2 on 2/4/2014 12:06 AM >
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All in all, I like it. Interesting perspective, good colors not over saturated, and the red phone pops. I might have cropped it differently, so that the door isn't in the frame, but still a nice image.

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Re: First Critique
<Reply # 3 on 2/4/2014 4:48 PM >
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A straight on shot would of been nice instead of at an angle like this. What draws me to the image are the colours in the phone and the texture in the wall, so the leading line you created with the angle takes away from that.

i'd also prefer seeing a straight wall (line in the corner near the door straight) than have a straight phone.

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Re: First Critique
<Reply # 4 on 2/5/2014 5:50 PM >
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Everything in the photo leans to the right. The subject (phone) should either be perfectly aligned vertically or else at an angle that makes sense for some compositional reason.

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