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ahhntzville
 
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Boston
 |  | Re: some of my favorite shots. love 'em or hate 'em, give me feedback!
<Reply # 1 on 4/2/2013 5:29 PM >
|  | | | I hope #1 isn't where I think it is, a place that I thought was gonna be reused (nail factory?).
2 is cool, I personally would have composed it with the clock not quite so far down in the corner, but eh.
3 suffers from some lens distortion but is otherwise pretty good, and funny.
In 7 the house touches the right edge of the frame.
I really like the last one but it's just slightly crooked.
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hxcphotog
 
location:
Norton, MA
Gender: Female
| |  | Re: some of my favorite shots. love 'em or hate 'em, give me feedback!
<Reply # 2 on 4/2/2013 5:50 PM >
| | | | Posted by arntzville
I hope #1 isn't where I think it is, a place that I thought was gonna be reused (nail factory?).
2 is cool, I personally would have composed it with the clock not quite so far down in the corner, but eh.
3 suffers from some lens distortion but is otherwise pretty good, and funny.
In 7 the house touches the right edge of the frame.
I really like the last one but it's just slightly crooked.
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1. I believe that's the same place. I took that shot a couple years back when I first got into exploring these places. I'm pretty sure this building was knocked down recently.
Thanks for all the feedback, you pointed out several things I never noticed!
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DrWindyNibbles
location:
North Orange County
Gender: Male
"For if you forgive others their trespasses, your heavenly Father will also forgive you"
| | | Re: some of my favorite shots. love 'em or hate 'em, give me feedback!
<Reply # 3 on 4/3/2013 3:25 AM >
| | | | I really like...
#1: Very good composition, I love the reflection, but it seems a little bit flat, maybe you could add some clarity to just the reflection. (I sure hope you have Photoshop)
#2: Wonderful exposure, has just enough grit to it.
#4: Awesome decay, but it seems a little bit snapshotty. I recommend a tripod and a longer exposure for the future, if you can get back in the school.
#6: Extremely well preserved location. I really like the window lighting. It could look cool with a sun ray or two, but that is all up to you.
#7: Great texture with the Fore, Mid, and Background. Nice use of a high F-stop.
#8: I really like the distance, it seems like the approach looking forward or way home looking back. Great use of a clear sky!
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moapy
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<Reply # 4 on 4/3/2013 10:06 AM >
| | | | I adore 7 and 8 (I even like the off frame house in 7, break them rules girl!)
The rest are nice but don't do a lot for my tastes 
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spie125
location:
Las Vegas NV 89031
Gender: Male
Behind a lens of digital matters you make anything
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<Reply # 5 on 5/6/2013 4:14 PM >
| | | | i love 3 2 and 7 your photos are great Very good composition i also like the use of your rule of thirds over all your photos are great try shooting more black and white photos your good at it.
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