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mhester location: Hails from parts unknown Gender: Male \| \|	New stuff for you to wreck have fun < on 3/13/2013 5:04 PM >

	Was bored and wanted to post some new stuff. Have fun trashing and happy exploring! 1. Lost in the fog by mhester, on Flickr 2. Just Hanging around by mhester, on Flickr 3. Rusted away by mhester, on Flickr 4. Remington Arms by mhester, on Flickr 5. Kings Park Psychiatric Center by mhester, on Flickr 6. Remington Arms by mhester, on Flickr Long time Urban explorer, who wants to push my love for the abandoned world into the art community.

Steed location: Edmonton/Seoul Gender: Male Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor \| \|	Re: New stuff for you to wreck have fun <Reply # 1 on 3/14/2013 1:34 AM >

	I really like the first one, although it might look better if you had a bit more sky visible. The second one doesn't quite work because the subject isn't isolated enough from the background. I'm assuming this is a chair inexplicably hanging from ropes in the middle of a room, but with everything in focus it's hard to see it in 3D. The best way to shoot this would be with a wide-open aperture so the background is out of focus, and you might need to be lower so that the chair's distance from the ground is more noticeable. I see you had a low F-stop in the next shot, though. 4 doesn't seem like an interesting subject to me, and in 5 I think it would be more interesting to be closer in on the newspapers themselves. You manage to keep the lines straight in 6 but there's not really anything dramatic in it again.

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Re: New stuff for you to wreck have fun
<Reply # 2 on 3/14/2013 2:46 AM >

Posted by Steed
I really like the first one, although it might look better if you had a bit more sky visible.

The second one doesn't quite work because the subject isn't isolated enough from the background. I'm assuming this is a chair inexplicably hanging from ropes in the middle of a room, but with everything in focus it's hard to see it in 3D. The best way to shoot this would be with a wide-open aperture so the background is out of focus, and you might need to be lower so that the chair's distance from the ground is more noticeable.

I see you had a low F-stop in the next shot, though.

4 doesn't seem like an interesting subject to me, and in 5 I think it would be more interesting to be closer in on the newspapers themselves. You manage to keep the lines straight in 6 but there's not really anything dramatic in it again.

Thanks for the feed back. In the first one that is the fog it was as thick as pea soup that day lol

Long time Urban explorer, who wants to push my love for the abandoned world into the art community.

FloodSpectre location: New York Gender: Male \| \| \|	Re: New stuff for you to wreck have fun <Reply # 3 on 3/24/2013 3:50 PM >

	I have to agree with Steed on #1, more sky would have helped this shot. It tends to look nicer if you keep your horizon at about 1/3 of the way up in your shot rather than nearly dead center. Otherwise, it's a pretty sweet photo. http://www.flickr....hotos/floodspectre

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