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THEORY Ethics Observations   PRACTICE Abandoned Sites Boats Churches Drains/Catacombs Hotels/Hospitals Transit Tunnels Utility Tunnels Various   RESOURCES Exploration Timeline Infilnews Infilspeak Dictionary Usufruct Blog Worldwide Links	Infiltration Forums home | search | login | register Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Interested in some feedback (Viewed 423 times) PooYo  location: Midwest Gender: Male  |  Interested in some feedback < on 8/23/2012 8:09 PM >   Any and all comments and criticisms are welcome. Thanks for checking them out. Camera_Canon T3i 600d Lens_Tamron 10mm-24mm This is the result of my efforts to do something artistic to make the photo more interesting. I edited one exposure in cs5 with HDR toning. The color was desaturated and then colored back in with vibrance where you see it. Red Staircase by Justin the Moment, on Flickr Exposure_20 Aperture_f/5.6 Focal Length_11 mm ISO Speed_100 This was my first attempt at Blend and Bracket. I used a darker exposure to bring back the doors on both sides and a bit of the hole in the roof. My original exposure had to be significantly brighten. If I could take the photo again I would've dropped the f-stop a little more, or just light painted the room, after spinning steel wool. Palace Theater by Justin the Moment, on Flickr Exposure_30 Aperture_f/5.0 Focal Length_10 mm ISO Speed_100 This is my second attempt at Blend and Bracket. I used a darker exposure to bring back the street and a part of the park. Satisfying Sunrise by Justin the Moment, on Flickr Exposure_13 Aperture_f/6.3 Focal Length_10 mm ISO Speed_200 rlx  location: Minneapolis Gender: Male forget regret.  |  Re: Interested in some feedback <Reply # 1 on 8/24/2012 7:50 PM >   #1. Love the composition as well as the texture on the walls. The photo is lacking some pop to me though. I think adjusting the shadows and highlights a tiny bit would go a long way here. Also, I would probably bump the color up a bit - if only on the rug itself. #2. Good job bringing detail back in the doors. I don't think you want to drop your f-stop anymore. I think you should raise your f-stop quite a bit here because you are loosing a lot of sharpness(quite noticable when viewed large). #3. I would bump up the f-stop here quite a bit as well. Overall, I like them though. Good job! forget regret. Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Interested in some feedback (Viewed 423 times) Powered by AvBoard AvBoard version 1.5 alpha Page Generated In: 66 ms