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Sceptic
  
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|  | | | 3 shots from my last explore, always trying to improve...all feedback appreciated. Thanks.
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PAexplorations
    
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<Reply # 2 on 7/5/2012 2:05 AM >
| | | | oooo i know where youuu wereee.....lol i love #1 cant ever get a bad shot of that!
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Steed
  
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<Reply # 3 on 7/5/2012 2:27 AM >
| | | | I was going to say the opposite. I don't know what you were going for in 1, but 2 and 3 are more interesting. I'm guessing there's some kind of story to go with the room? 2 is well exposed and the focus is perfect, and 3 is great except for the reflection on the picture frame. In order to avoid that sometimes I shoot at a low angle and then just stretch everything back into a square image later on in Photoshop.
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Sceptic
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<Reply # 4 on 7/5/2012 1:01 PM >
| | | | @ pissymissy , lol, such a fun favorite
Posted by Steed
I was going to say the opposite. I don't know what you were going for in 1, but 2 and 3 are more interesting. I'm guessing there's some kind of story to go with the room? 2 is well exposed and the focus is perfect, and 3 is great except for the reflection on the picture frame. In order to avoid that sometimes I shoot at a low angle and then just stretch everything back into a square image later on in Photoshop.
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Thanks for the advice, that reflection was killing me, i never thought of trying that, i assume i could do the same to avoid shadows?
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Derelict Compositions
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<Reply # 6 on 7/5/2012 1:20 PM >
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I dont care for the boarders personally.
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*borders (since this is a critique forum)... 
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ahhntzville
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<Reply # 7 on 7/5/2012 2:31 PM >
| | | | ^hahaha
I like 1, although it seems like maybe it could use a bump in contrast. Not sure about that, it just seems a bit flat somehow. I also would have moved that box on the left out of the shot, but that's more of a personal preference.
The composition on 3 is a little eh. The framed picture is centered vertically; I think the shot might looks better if your framed it further down the wall.
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<Reply # 8 on 7/5/2012 10:07 PM >
| | | | They're great, I'm having trouble thinking of any suggestions! I suppose maybe a tighter crop on the first one might eliminate some sorta dead space. But really it's just fine as is.
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<Reply # 9 on 7/6/2012 9:06 PM >
| | | | Posted by arntzville
^hahaha
I like 1, although it seems like maybe it could use a bump in contrast. Not sure about that, it just seems a bit flat somehow. I also would have moved that box on the left out of the shot, but that's more of a personal preference.
The composition on 3 is a little eh. The framed picture is centered vertically; I think the shot might looks better if your framed it further down the wall.
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I agree about the contrast on the first two. Nice but seem flat to me
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Sceptic
location:
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Gender: Male
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<Reply # 10 on 7/8/2012 2:06 PM >
| | | | Posted by arntzville
^hahaha
I like 1, although it seems like maybe it could use a bump in contrast. Not sure about that, it just seems a bit flat somehow. I also would have moved that box on the left out of the shot, but that's more of a personal preference.
The composition on 3 is a little eh. The framed picture is centered vertically; I think the shot might looks better if your framed it further down the wall.
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Thanks,
I see what you're saying about the first feeling a bit flat
And I know what you mean about the box, I find it distracting myself looking back at it
When you sat centered vertically for #3, you mean taking the shot at more of an angle down the wall instead of straight on? thanks again
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ahhntzville
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<Reply # 11 on 7/9/2012 7:27 PM >
| | | | Posted by Sceptic
When you sat centered vertically for #3, you mean taking the shot at more of an angle down the wall instead of straight on? thanks again
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I meant straight on but from a lower vantage point, so we could see more of the wall below the molding and the framed picture would be off-center to the upper right side. That's really just personal preference, though; I am certainly not a composition expert by any stretch.
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Adv.Pack
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Adventure Pack
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<Reply # 12 on 7/9/2012 11:38 PM >
| | | | Don't touch the contrast. The first one needs a little lightening in key areas. The second could use a little softer highlights. The last one is really dark and I hate the reflection in the glass. I would have just taken the glass out.
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