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Infiltration Forums > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Middle Heads (Australia) (Viewed 542 times)
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Middle Heads (Australia)
< on 6/16/2012 11:25 AM >
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Hey guys,

Few snaps of mine. Please let me know where i can improve. No HDR in sight.


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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 1 on 6/16/2012 12:17 PM >
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Only post a max of 5 pictures in critiques please. Its just way too much to comment on 15.

But at a whole, you gotta do something about that vignette. Its like you have too many filters or a lens hood thats too small or something.

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 2 on 6/16/2012 12:44 PM >
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few shots had harsh vig due to bad hood gilty with that. What about in general composition, feel and post processing.?


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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 3 on 6/16/2012 12:57 PM >
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@Snow7 Comps and framing was nice. Your eye towards lines and geometry was evident.
How much pp did you actually do? Or were these pics sooc? Do you play with your exposure compensation settings? I tend to play around with it to highlight certain details and colors in the picture. Overall a nice set.

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 4 on 6/16/2012 2:11 PM >
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These are all too contrasty.

.... I say this for most all photo critiques but its true. Make sure you have detail everywhere.


What camera/lens are you using?

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 5 on 6/16/2012 2:24 PM >
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Using d5100 with kit lense. I boosted up the contrast as it was a dark ang gloomy day with non stop rain so all the pics were dull and washed out... Kind of boring.

How do i add life into pics in this scenario?

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 6 on 6/16/2012 11:33 PM >
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Its okay to add contrast. Don't do it by adjusting a "contrast" slider though. Play with contrast in "levels" or "curves" instead. This will give you better control over highlights, mid-tones, and shadows. Again just remember to retain detail everywhere.

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 7 on 6/17/2012 3:13 AM >
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Number 6 looks like something Hydro would post.

Pretty cool shots dude. I wish the shot of the Coastline in 4 didn't have that huge white area in the middle, but its not a shot ruiner. Overall cool set.

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 8 on 6/17/2012 3:27 AM >
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I could see number 4 being really cool if it wasnt overexposed. I find the greens a little to over saturated. Keep them coming though!

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 9 on 6/18/2012 10:58 PM >
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Thanks for your help guys, will try to improve on the next set and will ask you again

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Re: Middle Heads (Australia)
<Reply # 10 on 6/18/2012 11:18 PM >
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Posted by SeanPC
Number 6 looks like something Hydro would post.

Pretty cool shots dude. I wish the shot of the Coastline in 4 didn't have that huge white area in the middle, but its not a shot ruiner. Overall cool set.


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