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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Got anything? (Viewed 339 times)
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Got anything?
< on 4/12/2011 12:30 AM >
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Bring the pain

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Re: Got anything?
<Reply # 1 on 4/12/2011 12:39 AM >
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looks out of focus. uninteresting. and if your using the e600 id expect a little more =[ not trying to be harsh just \imo/ i have no doubt u can do better

1. flash = ewww shadow
2. boring/ looks like you raised the levels up and thus results in the weird film look u can seem on the sides.???
3. needs focus and im falling to the left lol
4. love it lol its cool \imo/ maybe raise the contrast a bit to bring out the edges more.
5. i dont like the CD being in the frame. i think u shudve focused on the pyramidal object itself haha but not bad
6. the backgroud is out but the foreground seems not so much blurred but....hmmm just not the right lighting on it/levels


well thats my 2 cents.

hope it helps. but im no ansel adams...though thats more ...outside... lol yeah

ther not bad just in a C&C sense not worthy of anything special lol o wait that sounds harsh....nevermind...ignore that last comment. im going to go sit in a corner

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Re: Got anything?
<Reply # 2 on 4/12/2011 5:24 AM >
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Posted by Price
looks out of focus. uninteresting. and if your using the e600 id expect a little more =[ not trying to be harsh just \imo/ i have no doubt u can do better

1. flash = ewww shadow
2. boring/ looks like you raised the levels up and thus results in the weird film look u can seem on the sides.???
3. needs focus and im falling to the left lol
4. love it lol its cool \imo/ maybe raise the contrast a bit to bring out the edges more.
5. i dont like the CD being in the frame. i think u shudve focused on the pyramidal object itself haha but not bad
6. the backgroud is out but the foreground seems not so much blurred but....hmmm just not the right lighting on it/levels


well thats my 2 cents.

hope it helps. but im no ansel adams...though thats more ...outside... lol yeah

ther not bad just in a C&C sense not worthy of anything special lol o wait that sounds harsh....nevermind...ignore that last comment. im going to go sit in a corner
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Thank you! You are not harsh at all, I posted them in here for a reason and you have lived up to that reason. lol.


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Re: Got anything?
<Reply # 3 on 4/12/2011 5:56 AM >
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Posted by callmejazz



Thank you! You are not harsh at all, I posted them in here for a reason and you have lived up to that reason. lol.



lol thanks lol i see where youre going and im positive you cando better. ther not bad ther just....well...normal lol

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Re: Got anything?
<Reply # 4 on 4/12/2011 11:03 PM >
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4, and 5 are interesting. i can't tell if they're shingles or side paneling or a wall, but its cool none the less. 5 good use of light and shadow as well as line quality.

i like 3 as well bc it truly gives you and idea of how large this place is.

good job, and idk if you used flash in the first one but try to stay away from it. it ends up giving and unnatural look. the only time i use flash is if i know the show will be crap and i just want to document for myself that i was at a location, and or for shots of friends in a dark place like a bar or club, you cant help it then.

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Re: Got anything?
<Reply # 5 on 4/15/2011 5:12 PM >
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1, 5 & 6 I feel could benefit from a change of composition. I generally find that photos look more amateur when the subject is directly in the center of the photo. I guess thats where the rule of thirds may come in...

I really like the pattern that you captured in #4. Definitely caught my eye and made me look twice.

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