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Location: Fornication with the dead, WA
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< on 3/9/2011 6:59 AM >
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Adv.Pack
Location: Connecticut
Adventure Pack
| | Re: 3 from random
<Reply # 1 on 3/10/2011 12:56 AM >
| | | | #1. Seems pretty good. That vertical line on the left bothers me though. I would cut it out or get more of it. The lighting is good though.
#2. The lighting is strange. I like the back light, but the light on the front is distracting. Its too harsh. Maybe wait until a different time of day or use something to defuse. What is that btw?
#3. Its kind of weighted to the right. I would turn more to the right. This way, you don't have as much blank wall on the left and we can see more of the objects on the right.
What do you shoot with?
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ahhntzville
Location: Boston
| | Re: 3 from random
<Reply # 2 on 3/10/2011 2:49 AM >
| | | | Yeah, crop out that crap on the left edge of #1, otherwise cool shot. #2 is awesome, I love it as is. #3 is boring, pointless, and unredeemable.
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de_tour
Location: Fornication with the dead, WA
| | Re: 3 from random
<Reply # 3 on 3/10/2011 3:57 AM >
| | | | Posted by Adv.Pack
#1. Seems pretty good. That vertical line on the left bothers me though. I would cut it out or get more of it. The lighting is good though.
#2. The lighting is strange. I like the back light, but the light on the front is distracting. Its too harsh. Maybe wait until a different time of day or use something to defuse. What is that btw?
#3. Its kind of weighted to the right. I would turn more to the right. This way, you don't have as much blank wall on the left and we can see more of the objects on the right.
What do you shoot with?
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That would be the solitary confinement chamber..in the lowest floor of the building. I think the hall lighting is what showed up on the front of the unit. 1st picture is with a 50d + wide angle and the others were with a rebel xti + kit lens.
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aaronni
Location: South Puget Sound
| | Re: 3 from random
<Reply # 4 on 3/10/2011 4:27 AM >
| | | | In addition to what others said.
#1 Vertical lines, the wall on the right is converging like you were shooting at a downward angle. It's not as distracting as the crop suggestion but somewhat noticeable.
#2. Slight barrel distortion from the kit lens. Lines are pretty good on this one.
#3 Like Arntz said it's a throw away, lacking on the upper left your eye drifts down to the right. The wide angle is wasted by being so far away from potential subjects. Get up close to the fans.
Wasn't 1 & 3 with the Tokina 11-16 and 2 with the kit lens?
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de_tour
Location: Fornication with the dead, WA
| | Re: 3 from random
<Reply # 5 on 3/10/2011 4:36 AM >
| | | | Posted by AaronNi
In addition to what others said.
#1 Vertical lines, the wall on the right is converging like you were shooting at a downward angle. It's not as distracting as the crop suggestion but somewhat noticeable.
#2. Slight barrel distortion from the kit lens. Lines are pretty good on this one.
#3 Like Arntz said it's a throw away, lacking on the upper left your eye drifts down to the right. The wide angle is wasted by being so far away from potential subjects. Get up close to the fans.
Wasn't 1 & 3 with the Tokina 11-16 and 2 with the kit lens?
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probably yeah, you would know better since you were there paying more attention.
want to tell me what book i read while on the toilet while your at it? 
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