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 jerm IX
    
Location: Somewhere, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
If you can't find something nice to say...say it on UER.
 |  |  | 1900's file factory pics
< on 2/16/2011 4:07 AM >
|  | | | my favorite shots from this old file plant in southern Ontario...
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what could i have done better?
1. Le Car
2. STOP
3. fake plastic trees -radiohead
4. white walls
5. warped floorboards
6. a colourful assortment of powdered paint pigments form a divided spastic rainbow on the ground
[last edit 2/16/2011 4:09 AM by jerm IX - edited 1 times]
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Jonno23
 
Location: Phoenix, Az, Sector zz9 Plural Z Alpha
Gender: Male
This space for rent
| | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 1 on 2/22/2011 6:32 AM >
| | | | wow. I just love how peaceful and untouched this place looks. The quiet in an abandonment is one of my favorite things. I would say you captured that pretty well here. Well except for the graf in the back of 2. but i love it still. (1 & 4 are prob my favorites though.)
Blah Blah Blah. Shut up and open the damn door.
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Kurt
Location: Taxachusetts
Gender: Male
NEVER SAY DEVER!
| | | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 2 on 2/23/2011 7:09 PM >
| | | | Posted by Jonno23
wow. I just love how peaceful and untouched this place looks. The quiet in an abandonment is one of my favorite things. I would say you captured that pretty well here. Well except for the graf in the back of 2. but i love it still. (1 & 4 are prob my favorites though.)
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i really really really like number 4, great shot. i have to agree with Jonno about the graffiti in 2... its a good shot, but without the graf it would have been a lot better. cool location though
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K8 Vonwolfie
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Location: ct
Gender: Female
people die right there ---->
| | | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 3 on 4/3/2011 6:40 AM >
| | | | i like them all except 3 and 5, i feel like there's a bit too much going on in 3 so its hard to distinguish whats the subject and then in 5 i feel if you had angled the camera downward to see the warped floors as opposed to laying the camera down level with then it would have given the shot i different feel
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yokes
 
Location: Toronto
Gender: Male
I aim to misbehave
| |  | | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 4 on 4/3/2011 12:32 PM >
| | | | 4 was close, but needed a little tweaking. In Photoshop I removed the barrel distortion with Lens correction and bumped up the contrast a little with levels and curves, and then sharpened a bit. Also trimmed off a little from the right side, to make the distance from the edge to the pillars the same on both sides. The bones of the photo are good, though. Try shooting with -1 exposure compensation (if you're using shutter or aperture priority).
5 has too much foreground to really show the floors warping. Get closer.
I think 1 is the strongest of the lot as presented.
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K8 Vonwolfie
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Location: ct
Gender: Female
people die right there ---->
| | | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 5 on 4/5/2011 12:11 AM >
| | | | Posted by yokes
5 has too much foreground to really show the floors warping. Get closer.
I think 1 is the strongest of the lot as presented.
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agreed 1 is really great texture, color, and composition wise compared to all the rest. and 5 i agree with, cant tell the warping
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jerm IX
Location: Somewhere, Ontario, Canada
Gender: Male
If you can't find something nice to say...say it on UER.
| | | Re: 1900's file factory pics
<Reply # 6 on 4/5/2011 12:33 AM >
| | | | thanks fellas, I appreciate these helpful tips and critiques.
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