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Location: A biology lab far, far away...
Gender: Male
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 |  | First Critique EVAAA!
< on 3/13/2010 7:12 AM >
|  | | | So, I thought it was about time that I started asking for input on my photographs. Please feel free to give me the good and bad:
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Protios
Location: Lower Sackville, Nova Scotia
Gender: Male
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| | Re: First Critique EVAAA!
<Reply # 1 on 3/13/2010 6:07 PM >
| | | | I think the subject in the first one is a little bit crooked, I think it would have been a wee bit better had the camera been face on, instead it seems to be a little to the right.
The second one is alright, door frame is cut off a little at the top, it's a bit distracting to me.
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TuxThePenguin
Location: De Pere, WI
Gender: Male
| | Re: First Critique EVAAA!
<Reply # 2 on 3/13/2010 10:06 PM >
| | | | 1) I have no qualms with this picture.
2) The top of the door frame is cropped off. A bit distracting. Other than that, I like it.
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Glass
  
Location: Chicago
as one does
| |  | Re: First Critique EVAAA!
<Reply # 3 on 3/14/2010 12:06 AM >
| | | | 1) I wish the highlights weren't blown on the wall... might be better if exposed less. Some straightening might be in order too.
2) Slightly overexposed too, and a wider aperture might work better. I know you probably closed it down to get the consecutive doorways sharp, but the whole picture is soft as a consequence.
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Game
Location: Norton Shores/Muskegon, MI
Gender: Male
| | | Re: First Critique EVAAA!
<Reply # 4 on 3/14/2010 10:17 PM >
| | | | I'm no pro but here's my .02
1) cool photo, could use a little straightening and a hair more contrast.
2) I like what you were doing with this one but consider this next time, what's your subject? I'm torn between objects in this photo.. The doors are the most interesting thing about this photo but you're not photographing them. It 'feels' like your subject is the typewriter which IS a cool ass subject but you should try and make it the focal point of your photo, or as everyone else has said if you want em both then make sure your subjects are ALL clearly visible.
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willskith
Location: Boston, MA
Gender: Male
| |  | | Re: First Critique EVAAA!
<Reply # 5 on 3/15/2010 3:08 PM >
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1) Really boring subject. Might have been a decent shot if you had used the geometry better, but the composition leaves a bit to be desired in that its not centered, and its pointing down so the lines are converging. The tones are too flat, it looks a little overexposed.
2) Much more interesting, but there is no definite subject and the composition is sloppy as hell. It lacks direction, I can't tell if the focus is supposed to be the typewriter, the doors, or the overall decay.
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