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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool (Viewed 513 times)
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One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
< on 6/22/2008 7:35 AM >
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Here are 4 from my latest set that I found to be the best, Rip em apart!

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 1 on 6/22/2008 8:03 AM >
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i like #4 the best

#1 the seat of the chair is a bit to close to the bottom, if you move it up a bit the shot gets more balanced. I like the comp though!

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 2 on 6/22/2008 2:54 PM >
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Wow, these are great images!
i love number 2. My only suggestion, if any, would be to burn/dodge all the bits and pieces on the floor, just to give it a little bit more contrast.

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 3 on 6/23/2008 10:26 PM >
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I’m kind of too overwhelmed by the coolness of this location, but still, as Martino says, and for me that goes for your second shot too, I guess they would’ve been better if you had the whole chair, and in the second shot, the table-leg in frame. Nice series nonetheless.

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 4 on 6/24/2008 2:43 AM >
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easily the best set i've seen from you dude, all exposures are spot on

number 3 is stiiiilll my favorite

my only criticism is that number 4 is slightly off center. i would have taken a step or two to the left then set the shot up

other than that these are great

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 5 on 6/25/2008 4:59 AM >
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Thanks everybody.
I remember with The Heiden shots I kinda just rushed around, Everyone wanted to leave.

With the Pool shots, I spent alot of time shooting. I thought everything was centered when I took the shot, The negative doesn't lie so. I wish I could go back and REALLY shoot the The Heiden, With film. But won't happen

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 6 on 6/26/2008 8:49 PM >
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They all look awesome, the only thing I can say is that 2 doesn't really have a focus. I really like 3 how all of the lines line up, the lines of the windows, the pool, the diving board it really adds to the depth. Nice

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Re: One night Stand at The Heiden by the Grossingers Pool
<Reply # 7 on 7/1/2008 12:57 PM >
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1 - meh.
2 - Awesome. This is confusing to look at in low res, but I think it would look much better on a big print.
3 - Awesome.
4 - Kinda cool. I enjoy the irony of the sign that says "deep end" - in case anyone didn't notice the 10 foot deep hole. This scene is begging for a person in it, sitting at the end of the diving board!

Actually, 3 would look pretty awesome with a chick in a bikini sitting on the diving board, facing out into the "pool." Or perhaps pretending to be about to dive. Or maybe a little kid in a swimsuit with a floaty-toy-thing around the waste, sitting on the edge of the pool, looking very glum.



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