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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Long Island Hospital. (Viewed 1000 times)
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Long Island Hospital.
< on 6/10/2008 4:40 AM >
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tear 'em up!

1.


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3.


4.





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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 1 on 6/10/2008 4:51 AM >
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Gah! I love that chair!
So Jeff, When we goin?

Haha.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 2 on 6/10/2008 5:45 AM >
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I will mention that when I look at your pictures my eyes are immediately drawn to the specs. I really think you should take the time to spot your pictures. It would make all the difference in the world.

Here is an example



Also, I found the picture to be too magenta for my tastes, so I took some out the lazy way. Yes, Desmet, I used the grey point clicker in levels. I will never believe levels to be obsolete!

I did the same with the following one. I kinda question your colours. I haven't been to where these pictures were taken, but I wonder if this might be more accurate, though that might not have been what you were going for...




[last edit 6/10/2008 12:19 PM by argonian - edited 2 times]

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 3 on 6/10/2008 7:44 AM >
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1 & 4 are eggcelent but maybe i would go for a bit more contrast & darkness in 4.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 4 on 6/10/2008 8:17 AM >
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comp of #4 is great!

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 5 on 6/10/2008 1:14 PM >
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Posted by argonian


Also, I found the picture to be too magenta for my tastes,

I kinda question your colours. I haven't been to where these pictures were taken, but I wonder if this might be more accurate, though that might not have been what you were going for...

http://farm4.stati...984889b6aa.jpg?v=0




his colors are pretty accurate. i know because i basically walked/ran three miles to sleep here and get no pictures. hahah

i definitely see the magenta in 2 and 3.

1 is my favorite. i probably slept on it.



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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 6 on 6/10/2008 1:23 PM >
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Just curious, did you bracket & blend your window shots?

Good set. The only thing I can mention, is that in number 4, the sandal in the way shot sort of ruins the theme that is being presented - that is, the peeling paint, sort of giving the effect that it's being carried onto the peeling sofa.. but then a random sandal being thrown in kind of ruins the effect.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 7 on 6/10/2008 1:46 PM >
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Posted by argonian
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thanks for the tips! i think i'm just being spot-lazy with my current scanner in anticipation of my new girl soon

Posted by Bryan
Just curious, did you bracket & blend your window shots?


nope these were all a single exposure

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 8 on 6/10/2008 2:02 PM >
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I am a bit of an asshole. When I see critique I tend to just be critical. So, I am back now to mention that I do like the composition in 4. Also, as a general rule, you are very good at avoiding distortion, watching your lines, etc.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 9 on 6/10/2008 2:28 PM >
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Posted by argonian
I am a bit of an asshole. When I see critique I tend to just be critical. So, I am back now to mention that I do like the composition in 4. Also, as a general rule, you are very good at avoiding distortion, watching your lines, etc.


no no i would MUCH rather have someone rip my pictures apart and tell me exactly what is wrong than have some say "ZOMG nice PEEKtures!"

i really appreciate input like yours thank you
it's really the best way to learn
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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 10 on 6/10/2008 3:05 PM >
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Posted by argonian
Also, I found the picture to be too magenta for my tastes, so I took some out the lazy way. Yes, Desmet, I used the grey point clicker in levels. I will never believe levels to be obsolete!


Curves does the same thing....same clicker.

[last edit 6/10/2008 3:05 PM by desmet - edited 1 times]

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 11 on 6/10/2008 3:08 PM >
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Posted by desmet


Curves does the same thing....same clicker.



I love my levels! Mostly because I can't use curves. I will never give up on my levels. NEVER!

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 12 on 6/10/2008 3:22 PM >
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Personally I wouldn't have chosen the white border for #1. The right side of the image is really bright and is a little distracting.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 13 on 6/10/2008 4:34 PM >
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Posted by argonian


I love my levels! Mostly because I can't use curves. I will never give up on my levels. NEVER!


LOL.

You should learn curves. Curves is supah sexy. Good for contrast adjustment, color correction, toning, etc.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 14 on 6/10/2008 5:52 PM >
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Posted by desmet


LOL.

You should learn curves. Curves is supah sexy. Good for contrast adjustment, color correction, toning, etc.


agreed!

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 15 on 6/10/2008 6:01 PM >
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This thread is supposed to be about insulting and nagging Jeff, not me.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 16 on 6/11/2008 4:21 AM >
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you need naw throw some dees on at bitch

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 17 on 6/11/2008 10:33 PM >
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Looking good, I really like #4!!!

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 18 on 6/16/2008 12:27 AM >
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Like the symmetry broken up by the objects in no. 3.

c.

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Re: Long Island Hospital.
<Reply # 19 on 6/17/2008 11:28 PM >
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i feel like number 3 is a lie.

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