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 HeresToLife88
   
Location: Union County
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< on 2/22/2008 2:51 AM >
|  | | | Posted in another forum but never really had a critique before so why not?
#1
#2
#3
#4
#5
Taken By Sony DSC-W55 (little point and shoot camera)
[last edit 2/22/2008 2:55 AM by HeresToLife88 - edited 1 times]
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 1 on 2/23/2008 3:53 AM >
| | | | Loved them all.
Number one is my favorite, but I wish it was a little bit darker.
Just my two cents.
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 2 on 2/23/2008 4:35 AM >
| | | | Thanks for the input, i actually kind of agree now that you mention it that it does look a little light
#1
[last edit 2/23/2008 3:42 PM by HeresToLife88 - edited 3 times]
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Steed
    
Location: Edmonton/Seoul
Gender: Male
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Race Traitor
| | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 3 on 2/23/2008 11:40 AM >
| | | | I've got 14 words for you: You darkened number one just a wee bit too much for my taste, brother.
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 4 on 2/23/2008 3:43 PM >
| | | | Re posted above a little less dark but darker than original, I think it looks a little better now. thanks for the input race.
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RochesterUE
Gender: Male
I'm a piggie!
| | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 5 on 2/23/2008 3:48 PM >
| | | | Posted by HeresToLife88
Thanks for the input, i actually kind of agree now that you mention it that it does look a little light |
Nice touch-up. I think overall the shot is a little better off.
http://cat.org.au/~predator/approach.txt
There is a time when the operation of the machine becomes so odious, makes you so sick at heart, that you can't take part; you can't even passively take part, and you've got to put your bodies upon the gears and upon the wheels, upon the levers, upon all the apparatus, and you've got to make it stop... |
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aikefu
Location: SW Ohio
Gender: Male
Yes.
| | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 6 on 2/23/2008 8:10 PM >
| | | | These are some really great shots! Good job!
Sorry to be such a contrarian, but I actually think the original 01 was too dark. Just goes to show you can't please everyone!  I also think 01 would be even better if you took the shot from a lot farther back and showed the wheelchair in the middle of a larger room.
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 7 on 2/23/2008 8:17 PM >
| | | | Yeah that would have looked cool in a bigger room i think, the hallway was kinda tight, there was equipment and random stuff all over and i try not to move things around too much and just take pictures of exactly whats there when i get there. But maybe I'll give it a try setting some cool shots up next time. Thanks again for letting me know what you all think!
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aikefu
Location: SW Ohio
Gender: Male
Yes.
| | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 8 on 2/23/2008 8:25 PM >
| | | | Posted by HeresToLife88
Yeah that would have looked cool in a bigger room i think, the hallway was kinda tight, there was equipment and random stuff all over and i try not to move things around too much and just take pictures of exactly whats there when i get there. But maybe I'll give it a try setting some cool shots up next time. Thanks again for letting me know what you all think!
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That's my philosophy when I take pictures as well. I try not to move or rearrange anything--just photograph things as they are. Depending on how long the hallway is, it might be pretty cool if you could go all the way back and show the wheelchair just sitting by itself at the end of the hallway. Then again, I'm not familiar with the layout of the building, so that shot might not work.
In any case, it looks like you have a great eye. My favorites are the reflective floor in 02 and the scattered-looking tiles in 04 and 05. I like the contrast in 03. Keep it up.
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 9 on 2/23/2008 8:34 PM >
| | | | Thanks, i have a more colorful open picture with the reflections
#6
Just to give a better feel for that room, my favorite one in the whole place probably.
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aikefu
Location: SW Ohio
Gender: Male
Yes.
| | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 10 on 2/23/2008 8:48 PM >
| | | | That's beautiful! I think that might actually be my favorite one of the whole thread. I couldn't tell that that tree/plant/vine (?) thing in 02 was actually inside the building, as it appears to be in 06.
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blitz
Location: Cumberland, ME
Good news!
| | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 11 on 2/25/2008 5:43 PM >
| | | | i like #2
I may not believe in marriage, but I do believe in best men. |
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 12 on 2/25/2008 6:56 PM >
| | | | #1 is ok
#2 i like
#3 and #4 really don't do anything
#5 is cool but i'd crop out the over-exposed bit at the top
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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HeresToLife88
Location: Union County
| | | | Re: Hospital Pics
<Reply # 13 on 2/25/2008 7:02 PM >
| | | | Good call with 5, I'll edit that out, Thanks
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