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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > 'The Arms of Industry' (Viewed 493 times)
Corporal_Clegg 


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'The Arms of Industry'
< on 8/27/2007 3:21 AM >
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Since it's only one I thought I'd just post it here in the critique section.



Taken today, I have more, I just need to resize/border more of them.

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 1 on 8/27/2007 3:36 AM >
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Wow, dude. Wow.
Your art has come so far since you started sharing it with me.

I'm awed.

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 2 on 8/27/2007 3:44 AM >
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I call bullshit.

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 3 on 8/27/2007 3:49 AM >
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Posted by Urbex Tom
I call bullshit.


lmao what?

Thanks Lexi

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 4 on 8/27/2007 3:05 PM >
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looks like you're out of focus.

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 5 on 8/31/2007 4:34 AM >
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Posted by Martino
looks like you're out of focus.


What the one on the left? Yeah I focused in on the one on the right.



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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 6 on 9/1/2007 11:51 AM >
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Posted by Corporal_Clegg


What the one on the left? Yeah I focused in on the one on the right.




the one on the right is sharper than the one left, but still...

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 7 on 9/1/2007 3:45 PM >
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Well besides it being out of focus what do you think?

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 8 on 9/1/2007 4:17 PM >
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I like it.

However, there's some things that could be improved. As said, the picture is a bit out of focus. The framing could also be improved - now there's too much empty on the right and the bottom of the left... err... valve(?) is out of frame. Since pictures like this look usually better when they are "symmetrical", it could also look better if you had taken the picture perpendicular to the... hrhrhrmmr... those things.

The background is a bit restless and could look better if it was out of focus. Of course, if you don't have a suitable lens, it can't be helped.

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 9 on 9/1/2007 7:23 PM >
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sorry dude quit interesting shot! otherwise i wouldn't have noticed.

Tupsumato about said it

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Re: 'The Arms of Industry'
<Reply # 10 on 9/1/2007 8:52 PM >
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I agree with Tupsumato.

I like the shot a lot.
I think one thing that could have improved it is, by closing down the aperture so the second thingy would be in focus as well...

Anyway, I like the colors a lot.

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