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 COWBOY695
  
Location: NORTHERN CALI ( NO NOT SAN FRANSISCO)
Gender: Male
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< on 6/20/2007 1:37 PM >
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onewingedangel
Location: omaha, nebraska
Gender: Female
sweet bliss
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<Reply # 1 on 6/20/2007 3:07 PM >
| | | | Not bad really, I like the lighting in one, though if you cropped the right side just a little youd draw more attention to the subject at hand because right now my eye is drawn to the trailers in the background.
On three, a little bit more of a shot to the right might have caught a little more of the curves of the truck but still not a bad shot, because you caught the character of it with the paint and the tumbleweed at the bottom shows its probably been there a while.
OWA
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Trevzilla
Location: St. John's, Newfoundland
Gender: Male
To hell with purple people....unless they're suffocating, Help Them!
| | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 2 on 6/20/2007 3:39 PM >
| | | | I think your tractor's sexy
You're only as young as who you feel! |
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Allva
 
Location: San Antonio, Texas
Gender: Male
I have my moments.
| | | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 3 on 6/20/2007 3:53 PM >
| | | | First two are way two similar and snapshotty.
Third one is in need of composition.
Take more and choose the best.
Life is hard, but it's harder when you're stupid. |
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Shr-eddie
Location: Toronto
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 4 on 6/21/2007 12:13 AM >
| | | | Three's composition isn't too bad, if you took maybe 5 steps back and pointed the camera to the right a bit and got the top of the truck in the picture it would have been better.
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hydrotherapy
   
Clever Girl
Location: Circle of Least Confusion
RPS is inside all of us
| | | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 5 on 6/21/2007 12:48 AM >
| | | | I'd love to see the first shot from closer to the ground, shot upwards. Last one does nothing for me, and the second is a duplicate of the first. Nice quality of light and good potential for some nice contrast/saturation in the first one. Just isn't quite there yet.
Get down, girl, go 'head, get down. |
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lindsayphoto
Location: philly
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 6 on 6/21/2007 10:24 PM >
| | | | The truck photo is well done.
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 7 on 6/22/2007 4:39 AM >
| | | | Posted by Allva
First two are way two similar and snapshotty.
Third one is in need of composition.
Take more and choose the best.
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agreed, try to get lower, dont be afraid to "get dirty" lay down crawl, do anything you have to to get your shot
Fight like a man
Bleed like a man
Die like a man |
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grateful
Location: buffalo,ny
Gender: Female
time takes time
| |  | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 8 on 6/22/2007 5:03 AM >
| | | | im no photographer but you've captured true essence here.
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COWBOY695
Location: NORTHERN CALI ( NO NOT SAN FRANSISCO)
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 9 on 6/22/2007 9:38 AM >
| | | | thanks ya all. I was just trying the first sun light out the other morning cause I couldnt sleep. Yeah i know the 1st 2 pics are the same i accidently uploaded the same one twice. The other one was a big orang tractor that turned out pretty sweet i will up load it later and let ya all look. Thanks for the tips and the props.
Cowboy
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SumoPope
Location: Cleveland
Gender: Male
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
| | | Re: just a feeble try
<Reply # 10 on 6/24/2007 6:20 PM >
| | | | Move the center in 1 + 2 to include the shadow of the tractor, get lower to the ground. You don't {i]have[/i] to get the shadow of the tractor, I think it just might add to the picture. Watch out for whats in the background, I see a trailer park that is just in the upper right hand corner that could be either the entire background for a context of scene or eliminated to produce a context of country desolation. Great lighting and sky!
I would have moved the camera slightly more to the left in #3, but very nice tone and subject overall, IMHO.
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