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 cwestcivic5
 
Location: Michigan
Gender: Male
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< on 6/13/2007 4:46 AM >
|  | | | i know i havent posted here in forever, but that doesnt mean i havent been exploring ;)
well heres a quick pic i just took. what do you think of it? ill upload some more as soon as i finish processing them a little, i just wanted to throw this one up so i could get some responses.
my buddy took this pic of me while we were exploring this tunnel. he wanted some feedback on this one too.
[last edit 6/13/2007 4:55 AM by cwestcivic5 - edited 2 times]
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 1 on 6/13/2007 11:44 AM >
| | | | ummmmm. thay both look like snap- shots to me, they lack composition. if i had to pick the better of the 2 i would say the second one
Fight like a man
Bleed like a man
Die like a man |
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 2 on 6/13/2007 2:01 PM >
| | | | SO.....MANY.....LINES......
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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brandonb5269
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 4 on 6/14/2007 3:56 AM >
| | | | 508 thats exactly what the second one is, i took it, i kinda turned around to ask him something and i thought it would be a cool quick pic. it was free hand to no tripod. so i dont think it came out that bad. but i do agree with u. it could be alott better
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 5 on 6/14/2007 11:40 AM >
| | | | Posted by brandonb5269
508 thats exactly what the second one is, i took it, i kinda turned around to ask him something and i thought it would be a cool quick pic. it was free hand to no tripod. so i dont think it came out that bad. but i do agree with u. it could be alott better
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please do not take i said to offence, this is the critique forum, and you posted pictures so i tell you what i think. im not saying its terrible, im just saying it lacks composition, try to put your subject off center, maybe get a little closer to you subject(which i think is you). or maybe try takin a longer exposure so you can bring out the colors inside the tunnel. and then you can blend the 2 pics together. thats just a suggestion. keep shooting you have potential.
508
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Captain Hook
Location: philadelphia
Gender: Male
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 6 on 6/14/2007 5:53 PM >
| | | | If the 2nd picture was alittle bit more centered, I think it would be pritty cool or even if it was more off center. With some cropping it would be great!
avast ye matties there is a squall aloof. Brace the jib and batten down the hatches! yarrrrr!!! |
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GWarren
Location: Tree Town, Michigan
Gender: Male
Walking the Croooked Beat
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<Reply # 7 on 6/14/2007 10:28 PM >
| | | | The first is ok, but the subject doesn't appeal to me, but the compostion is nice
The composition in the second could be better, center the image. The contrast in it is nice though
I noticed you live in Michigan, were these taken on the Huron River by anychance, that bridge looks familiar
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beneathandabove
Location: CoLoRaDo
Gender: Female
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 8 on 6/15/2007 2:13 AM >
| | | | I'd like to see number 1 so the horizontal boards are not parallel to the bottom of the photo. There would be more movement in the photo that way, and my eye wouldn't get stuck going back and forth.
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brandonb5269
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<Reply # 9 on 6/15/2007 3:25 AM >
| | | | 508 i was not offend or takeign it wrong i was agreeing with u. and thanx for the input. it was a spur of the moment pic lol and no gwarn these were not taking at that river. they were on part of the clinton river lol
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cwestcivic5
Location: Michigan
Gender: Male
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<Reply # 10 on 6/15/2007 3:46 AM >
| | | | heres the pic my friend took. he cropped it a bit as you guys suggested. a bit of feedback on that pic. he took the pic and i was the dude standing. just fyi to dodge any miscommunications 
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the_doctor
Location: Boston area
Gender: Male
It's probably dangerous
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<Reply # 11 on 6/15/2007 4:23 AM >
| | | | if u photoshoped the 2nd one correctly it would look cool
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: one new pic
<Reply # 12 on 6/15/2007 3:44 PM >
| | | | Posted by cwestcivic5
heres the pic my friend took. he cropped it a bit as you guys suggested. a bit of feedback on that pic. he took the pic and i was the dude standing. just fyi to dodge any miscommunications
http://i21.photobu...ceboy89/croped.jpg
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this is much better, what kind of camera did you shoot this with, and what format/quality did you shoot with?
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brandonb5269
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<Reply # 13 on 6/16/2007 5:07 AM >
| | | | i used a sony dcs w70 um i think exposer was at level 1 and i im not sure what quality i used. lol like i said it was spur of the moment. i had been just takin sum snap shots and turned and said stay still lol
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