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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > into the rabbit hole (Viewed 452 times)
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into the rabbit hole
< on 6/12/2007 9:02 AM >
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Titan I missile silo, eastern plains, Colorado.

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Crit please!

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 1 on 6/12/2007 5:18 PM >
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#2 definitely takes the cake. and thanks for using different colors - looks bad ass.

#1 confuses me. #4 woulda worked better had there been no light painting or if it had been more uniformly done. #5 same deal, and slightly snap-shotty.

#3 is really interesting... but the interesting part is far away and small, so very hard to see. i like that you framed it well, but i'd crop as much of the tunnel as i could (maybe to just outside the doors portrait style) and get the cool shit bigger and easier to see.

leave the gun. take the cannoli.

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 2 on 6/12/2007 7:00 PM >
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Nice long exposure shot in Num.2 I like it
The third is ok, but it looks like you started to do a long sxposure but stopped, but the compostition is spot on
Well done on these two
The others not so much
The first has no compostition in it at all it just looks like your camera accidentally went off
The fourth is the same story, looks like a snap shot, there is no orginization or composition
The fifth is ok, but the subject doesn't appeal to me at all

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 3 on 6/12/2007 10:03 PM >
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Go back for more pictures; It's a sweet site. So far, so good.

It seemed like a good idea at the time...
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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 4 on 6/12/2007 10:58 PM >
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Posted by GWarren
The third is ok, but it looks like you started to do a long sxposure but stopped, but the compostition is spot on


that one was originally brighter. i turned down the exposure to make it look darker. this is a dark place; not just literally, but it held the power to end the world.

and i can see the snapshottish thing on the last two. that's why they were the last two.

i do need to go back, but it'll be a while. it's a pain in the ass to get to, and to a degree, a pain in the ass to shoot in.

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 5 on 6/13/2007 11:48 AM >
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1. would be better with a longer exposure Vs. light painting.
2.the red glare in the front is distracting, it takes away from the shot, i think.
3.the best shot of the set, if only it was closer
4.great composition, good subject, bad light painting, same as 1 i would like to see what it looks like with a longer exposure Vs. light painting
5.meh

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 6 on 6/14/2007 11:14 PM >
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I like the second one, it looks pretty good. I only wish we had missile silos here, (sigh) oh well.

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Re: into the rabbit hole
<Reply # 7 on 6/19/2007 3:14 PM >
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cool use of lights, I really enjoy the red tints and the light painting you did, it adds a great element to your photos. Id imagine in a missile silo there is no light at all that is natural.

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