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Location: Providence RI
Gender: Male
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< on 6/11/2007 1:30 AM >
|  | | | I really need critique on these photos. I don't want to hear oh thats great or, oh thats bad. I need actual advice. I'm not so used to shooting people and I would like to get better at it. I do not want to be stuck being a one dimensional photographer.
I'm not really going for any high-end fashion photo look here. More along the lines of just some casual portraits.
Advice, please.
[last edit 6/11/2007 1:30 AM by ryan - edited 1 times]
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Speed
  
Location: Philly area
Gender: Male
Retired Explorer
| | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 1 on 6/11/2007 2:01 AM >
| | | | while I'm not remotely qualified to give advice or critique.
I'll take a stab at it.
#1) I love the composition, not diggin the color at all.
I think the left side of here face and neck is a little too bright. skin tone looks to light and the in focus flower next to her eye is distracting. might crop a little of the bottom too
#2 I'd love it if her berette(sp?) was the same color as her shirt and if her shirt was cut a bit lower (I mean no disrespect)
#3 I'm not diggin the composition(something I never thought I'd say regarding one of your photos)
also think the right side of her neck is a little blown out.
thats my 2 sense.....
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Allva
 
Location: San Antonio, Texas
Gender: Male
I have my moments.
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<Reply # 2 on 6/11/2007 2:28 AM >
| | | | Pretty standard snapshots.
Seem stilted, too posed, not natural.
Needs better composition
More color, more movement, more eye contact.....
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jesslovesharks
Location: Bed.
Gender: Female
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<Reply # 3 on 6/11/2007 6:58 PM >
| | | | Posted by Allva
Pretty standard snapshots.
Seem stilted, too posed, not natural.
Needs better composition
More color, more movement, more eye contact.....
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thats probably more my fault than his...
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Corporal_Clegg
Location: Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 4 on 6/11/2007 7:42 PM >
| | | | Yeah post the pictures 
Im thinking photobucket aint up or something is up with the internets, the tubes must be clogged.
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 5 on 6/11/2007 7:46 PM >
| | | | there's like, almost NO peeling paint. WTF?
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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Shr-eddie
Location: Toronto
Gender: Male
| | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 6 on 6/11/2007 7:47 PM >
| | | | I'm with Clegg, you broke it.
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Corporal_Clegg
Location: Baltimore, MD
Gender: Male
| | | | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 7 on 6/11/2007 7:47 PM >
| | | | The photos work for everyone but me 
Edit:
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Spoke too soon!
[last edit 6/11/2007 7:48 PM by Corporal_Clegg - edited 1 times]
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Glass
  
Location: Chicago
as one does
| | | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 8 on 6/11/2007 9:44 PM >
| | | | I can't see the pics, but I know they'd be better if the model was naked.
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Clever Girl
Location: Circle of Least Confusion
RPS is inside all of us
| | | Re: This isn't UE but...
<Reply # 9 on 6/11/2007 9:54 PM >
| | | | Oh, that's great.
Actually, I'm with everyone else, can't see 'em.
They're probably shots of 0rbz. Those don't show up very well on the internets.
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