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 don_corleyone
   
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
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< on 6/5/2007 11:36 PM >
|  | | | a few from a couple.
shot with my rebel XT, 18/55, and southern comfort:
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7
and an old favorite:
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[last edit 6/5/2007 11:51 PM by don_corleyone - edited 1 times]
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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DanWhitham
 
Location: Providence, RI.
Gender: Male
| |  | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 1 on 6/5/2007 11:52 PM >
| | | | That green hall in numbah 2 rox!
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Mark Vicious
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<Reply # 2 on 6/6/2007 12:19 AM >
| | | | great work, i like 2 and 4
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182 lbs of sad
Location: in the gym training my ass off!
Gender: Male
| | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 3 on 6/6/2007 11:30 AM >
| | | | i like 5,9. the best personally great set though
Fight like a man
Bleed like a man
Die like a man |
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mortimer
 
Location: teronno
| | | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 4 on 6/6/2007 1:44 PM >
| | | | Decent stuff, but you seriously need to get rid of the barrel distortion. CS2 > Filter > Distort > Lens Correction, especially on #2 and #4. Same filter could also help you at least partially straighten out your perspective in #1 and #5. Your old favourite is probably the best one of the bunch.
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Captain Hook
Location: philadelphia
Gender: Male
| | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 5 on 6/6/2007 2:20 PM >
| | | | 2,4,5,7 and 8 are awsome. 4 could use some croping of the left side but for the most part these shots are great. they have a pritty good balance of contrasts and they are pleasing to look at. One thing that could help you pics is i notice on a couple like 2,4 and 5 the picture needs to be rotated because its ascew. but with a few agustments it would be super awsome and not just awsome!
avast ye matties there is a squall aloof. Brace the jib and batten down the hatches! yarrrrr!!! |
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Myelin
 
Location: The End of Canada
Gender: Male
| | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 6 on 6/6/2007 2:24 PM >
| | | | The bike with its rust "imprint" on the ground below is just great. I always like sets like this but the bike one really did it for me. Good find.
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
| | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 7 on 6/6/2007 2:34 PM >
| | | | thx guys. i appreciate all the great advice.
i'll get to work on it and post back soon! w00t!
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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SumoPope
Location: Cleveland
Gender: Male
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
| |  | Re: for further scruitiny
<Reply # 8 on 6/6/2007 7:21 PM >
| | | | 1-It's a nice idea for a composition, but the subject seems a little gray and underexposed-either convert to B+W and increase contrast or wait for better weather?
2-I like the hallway, but there is a fairly obnoxious element? ledge? on the bottom. Did you shoot this through a window?
3-This really doesn't do anything for me.
4-This is cool, the paint is peeling where it was applied with a brush. Crop/center to door as the paint there is a lot more interesting then the paint around it.
5-I like this
6-It feels forced with two subjects posed like this- possible to take it more frontally or from the side with a more selective DOF?
7-That red stuff is pretty cool-that has more of my attention than the perspective.
8-Rust rust rust rust lust
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don_corleyone
Location: F/RoX
Gender: Male
I have abandonment issues
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<Reply # 9 on 6/6/2007 8:34 PM >
| | | | some addt'l post-processing per your suggestions. let me know what you think:
used a differently bracketed photo and brightened & pumped saturation:
only frame i shot, so i cropped to remove the desktop:
different shot, different crop, more saturation & sharpening:
leave the gun. take the cannoli.
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SumoPope
Location: Cleveland
Gender: Male
I watched C-beams glitter in the dark near the Tannhauser gate.
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<Reply # 10 on 6/10/2007 3:11 PM >
| | | | 1-Better, I think, but still fairly gray.
2-I really liked the horizionzal motion that the original had now that I can see it cropped. . . .it might be the crop of the hallway to the left or a combination of that and the desk.
3-much better, maybe crop it in even more, esp on the "in" medallion? That is specifically where the paint swirls like crazy.
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