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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > first attempt at some photos added one more (Viewed 230 times)
Vellian 


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first attempt at some photos added one more
< on 1/29/2007 3:11 AM >
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I took these while trying to find an old mining town, only found the cemetary
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nothing special I just want help taking better pictures
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polarizing filter used with that one
They were shot with a Fuji Finepix S3100

thanks
[last edit 1/29/2007 9:40 PM by Vellian - edited 4 times]

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 1 on 1/29/2007 3:18 AM >
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1- Great concept! The only thing i would've done, was pan the camera over to the right more, and maybe would have shot it at a higher shutter speed.

2 - This shot would be more powerful in black and white, and maybe at a small bit slower of a shutter speed. It actually may look better with your aperture open more, shot vertically, and maybe a bit closer on your subject, that way you don't have all of that stuff in the background taking you away from the subject.

Overall, great concepts, but you still need some work.

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 2 on 1/29/2007 4:14 AM >
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i second vin's crit of these images.

you should keep shooting, i think that the best way to improve is to keep shooting, and keep trying new things with your camera.

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 3 on 1/29/2007 4:23 AM >
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Stop copying off of me, jerk!

Seconding what rsolimeo said. Just do multiple exposures, perspectives, and shots in general of the same subject and pick which you like, if you're not sure what to do. Just keep practicing and you'll get it down.

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 4 on 1/29/2007 4:33 AM >
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yeah i feel a bit limited by my camera, probably because i havent figured it all out yet, ive had it almost 2 year now and i just learned it has a night shot setting. I added another shot from today at the Grand Canyon (PA)

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 5 on 1/29/2007 6:28 AM >
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Obviously, a lot of what makes a good photo is the subject, you could have all the technical prowess in the world and still end up with mediocre shots because your subjects are dull. I'm not saying this in a mean way at all but especially in shot 2, it's rather dull. My suggestion would to be, first, straighten the photo so the horizon is level, and possibly crop to make the shot a little more interesting. If that doesn't work go back and reshoot it until you find something that does. Practice doesn't make perfect here, but it makes you a lot better.

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Re: first attempt at some photos
<Reply # 6 on 1/29/2007 9:12 PM >
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I dont think the 1st is very successful because its to out of focus, but i really like the 2nd and 3rd ones. The grave stones are awsome and on the other picture the trees in the lower left corner are awsome.

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Re: first attempt at some photos added one more
<Reply # 7 on 1/30/2007 1:46 PM >
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Posted by Captain Hook
I dont think the 1st is very successful because its to out of focus


It looks like very slight camera shake more than anything.

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Re: first attempt at some photos added one more
<Reply # 8 on 1/30/2007 8:21 PM >
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I like the view on #3

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Re: first attempt at some photos added one more
<Reply # 9 on 1/31/2007 1:01 AM >
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Ah, the 3100. I remember that camera.

The first one was good. I like your concept there. The rest were just kinda meh.


Were these taken in Colorado?

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Re: first attempt at some photos added one more
<Reply # 10 on 1/31/2007 1:24 AM >
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nope, pennsylvania number 3 was the PA grand canyon, which is a spectacular location

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Re: first attempt at some photos added one more
<Reply # 11 on 1/31/2007 1:42 AM >
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for 3 i would like it alot more if it was black and white, and contrasty.

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