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UER Forum > Archived UE Photo Critiques > Dog Park Hospital (Viewed 271 times)
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Dog Park Hospital
< on 10/18/2006 6:15 PM >
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I'm trying to get better. I've already noticed one of my faults, I need to expose more for my highlights- I tend to let them get blown out. And some of these I can see what's wrong with them now that I'm looking at them behind a monitor and not on my camera. I'm finding that I keep trying to take long hallway shots or shots of rooms and they never come out the way I want them to, they never seem to jump at me like they do when I'm actually in the room. Everything seems compressed and flat, and I haven't figured out why yet, I'm not using a zoom lens so it baffles me. And I also managed to shoot this entire 5 hour session in slightly grainy iso 1600 without even realizing I had set it on that a couple days prior to shoot a high school football game at night . Regardless, any and all criticism is appreciated to help me get better. Thanks.


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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 1 on 10/18/2006 10:53 PM >
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AH WHAT LOOKS TO BE A SCARY DEAD CAT.

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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 2 on 10/18/2006 10:58 PM >
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Nice work! 9 and 20 are my favourites. I see what you mean about the blown out highlights, especially in 1..

Just curious, what f stop are you using in the hallway shots you're talking about.?

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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 3 on 10/19/2006 12:14 AM >
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I'm checking my images right now, it looks like I'm shooting at f/3.5, f4.5....4.0......I think a lot of my issues has to do with the framing of the subject, I haven't learned an effective way to frame a room yet that comes out appealing to me.

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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 4 on 10/19/2006 12:28 AM >
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Posted by mlserychlc
I'm checking my images right now, it looks like I'm shooting at f/3.5, f4.5....4.0......I think a lot of my issues has to do with the framing of the subject, I haven't learned an effective way to frame a room yet that comes out appealing to me.


Are you aware of the basics of depth of field?

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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 5 on 10/19/2006 6:23 PM >
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# 27 is awesome. i like that fact that you really need to look at it to figure out what it is. I also like the colors. Great job.

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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 6 on 10/23/2006 5:24 AM >
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i know where that is....

you need to go back.... theres SOOOO MUCH you can capture there



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Re: Dog Park Hospital
<Reply # 7 on 10/23/2006 2:43 PM >
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amazing pictures...where is this place?

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